Aww, Jack gets looked after so well, Amari is definitely a keeper for him, lets just hope that he doesn't fuck things up between them...although the thing with Holly wasn't exactly his fault...I reckon that it was a mutual thing
ANYWAY, this is by far my favourite update AND I did see the little snippet on Tumblr (I have your page bookmarked so I check it everyday to see if something new has been added to it!)
I really can't wait to read more, most definitely my favourite Jack fic!
@ SoWrongItsLottie Thank you for noticing! That's what I get for typing three different stories all at once with the same characters! Imma change that ASAP!
YOU'VE FINALLY UPDATED THIS! I've missed this fic so much!
Question: Where you meant to write the name Poppy a couple of times? I was reading it and thought you may have gotten it mixed up with For The Sake Of Saving Us...
I can't wait to see where this fic is going to go, although Jack does seem to be getting drunk a lot in this XD!
"You lack a certain amount of cleavage, sorry bro." - Best. Line. Ever!
Aww Jack Attack, you don't need to defend Holly anymore (dude, did you know that she's pregnant now?!). Plus, he seems like such a sweetheart to go out on a date with...this I don't have any experience with. Jack! Phone me, like now!
Ooooo, they're going to do it! Jack, you dark horse, you! Such a stud ;D
This update is fantastic! Definitely can't wait to read more :D
@ SoWrongItsLottie I want Jack to spill a drink down me, OK? That's weird, and maybe a little creepy but I can just imagine how fucking cute he'd look as he said sorry :3
and yes, yes of course I am the whole of All Time Low, including crew.
313th play?! Holy damn, woman! I've only listened to it about ten times...I think I'm going to have to put it on again in a moment, once this comment has been typed. I actually really love the song, but I don't want to overplay it too much, but if the album is anything like that song and The Reckless And The Brave, then those boys have nothing to worry about :D
To the update though!
I totally laughed at the conversation between Mari and Alex / Alex and Jack, you write them surprisingly well...it's almost as if you are them *glares at you suspiciously*...you aren't them, are you?!
Jack apologizing is the most adorable thing ever (I actually have personal experience of Jack apologizing because he personally apologized to me after tipping his drink down me as we were getting a photo together, but like the gentleman that he is, he said sorry and wiped it off of me :D)
I really love this fic, it's intriguing and I can't wait to see where you take it :) I definitately recommended and subscribed to this!
LOL! That last part was genius XD! & FINALLY an idea for a plot that hasn't been done! I mean the bar idea, of course. I don't think that I've read a fic before that's used it so kudos to you my dear :)
Its hard to believe that its been six months since you mentioned this to me! I'm glad that you have though, as it's awesome and I already know that it's going to be one of the best fics that you've written :D