Okay wow, this layout is gorgeous and I love the banner and the border and how cutesy everything is despite the black and white.
Moving on to the story, I have to say that I enjoy it so far. Alice and Desmond's love is the type of love that I think, a lot of girls want, where the other person will love you no matter what happens sort of thing. But then, despite the love they have for each other, Alice can't see a future with him that involves getting married so it makes me wonder why that is so. It's like, you build up this great love they have for each other but then you mention that Alice doesn't see herself getting married to Desmond and I can't help but question the whole story. But in a good way. It makes me want to read on and find out what's going through Alice's mind and how great their love can really be. I hope you continue this, it sounds lovely so far and I'm intrigued to see where this goes!
I kinda just accidentally clicked on this, but then decided to read it anyway. And I'm glad I did! I'm already interested and can't wait for your next update!