Love Story - Comments

@ MoMo_92
thanks.. I will use spell check

So Blaze saw Razz fight I hope he doesn't snitch on her, anyhoo love it it was great cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :) **sidenote: be careful with ur spelling**

@ MoMo_92
they are the same person... if you go on wattpad its the same story just different characters... anyways thanks for the comment

Who is Razz, is it Purple??? Can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Awww what happened to Rain, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I like the redo chapter, I wonder what JJ did? I think it's kinda weird tht Blase is friends with Purple's boyfriend and it's also weird tht he doesn't even kno who she is if he is friends with Taylor, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

@ AZNGRL
Ok lol and I kno but it's ok to get a little help to be a little perfect I mean a perfectionist isn't perfect lol

@ MoMo_92
Well no one is perfect rite?.. I'll redo it right now

**chapter 3: Purple P.O.V.
After I locked the door, I punched him in the jaw.
" that's for covering for your arse."
Just as I was about to punch him again the door bell rang.
I yelled " who is it?"
" open up sis, rent is due. "
I tied him to the chair, with duck tape over his over mouth and his feet and arms were wrapped up so that tight that he couldn't move. I then fixed
myself up. I looked in the mirror to make sure that I looked neat. And then went to answer the front door.

Hoodie Guy P.O.V.
I was struggling in the chair. I then remembered my lucky pocket knife. As I got out my lucky knife, the door swung open and she stood there. I tried no to look to suspicious. She shrug her shoulders and started to untie me. Once she untied my ankles, she said “ you untied your hands didn’t you.”
I shook my head no.
She then untapped my mouth.
“ Ouch the fucking hurts.” I yelled
“ be a man.” She yelled back.
Just as she went behind the chair to untie my hands her phone rang.

Birthday Sex - Jeremiah

She took out her phone from her pocket and answer her phone.

Great this is going to be long. She sat on the table and started talking on her phone. I took out my pocket knife and tried again hopping she wont notice it.

Purple’s P.O.V.
When I took off the duck tape off his mouth, he yelled.

“ Be a man.” I yelled at him and went to behind the chair to untie his hands when my phone rang.
Birthday Sex - Jeremiah

I took out my phone rang answer it.
“ Hi babe.” I said as cheerfully as I sat on the table facing him.
“ Hey.”
“ babe, something is wrong.” I said all worried.
“ Its um… I promised the guys that I hanged out but I promised you dinner date with your sister.”
“ Its fine, I’ll cancel with my sister maybe next time.”
“ Thanks babe, I promise I won’t bail on you again.”
Just as I was about say I love you, the line went dead. I sigh and
then said “ Boy, you can stop pretending to be tied.”
“ I have no clue what your talking about.”
I got off the table and walked towards him and then said “ why you…Argh!" ** this is where u end chapter 3 but this passage was in the beginning of chapter 4 when u should have started in passage below

**beginning of chapted 4: Hoodie guy P.O.V.
I watched her get all frustrated. I was just about to laugh when her phone rang .
It Girl - Jason Chen
She picked it up and answered.
I got up from the chair and smirked at her with my hands crossed over my chest.
“ Hold on Hoe.”
She put the phone on the shoulder and said “ get out of my house.”
“ make me.”
She then spoke to the person on the phone telling them that she’ll call back. Once she hug up, She s pushed me out the door. Just as I was about to open my mouth, she said “ your fucking welcome for saving your arse now. I don’t ever want to see you again.” and with she slammed the door in front of my face.

During Dinner….
Purple pov
I sat down across from my sister and her boyfriend. I felt so Awaked that I was about to text Kevin to get me out of this dinner. Just because my boyfriend canceled on me and my sister had a back up plan. I wonder if the guy is hot. What am I saying I have a - a guys voice interrupted my thoughts. I saw him hugging John. Once John introduced him to my sister he turned to face me and I was shocked to see that it was the hoodie guy from this morning.

Hoodie guy pov
After I left her house, I to the park to see if the guys were still there. When they weren't there, I went home. Just as I opened the door Jenny, my dog pushed me down and started to lick my face.
" laze, where have u been.”
Just as I was about to answer him, he said “ never mind, walk Jenny because I’m head to the store.”
Once I putting the leash on Jenny, John said “You don't have plans for tonight rite." While putting on his shoes.
" what's the catch?"
He stood up from the couch and said “
" I promise that you'll go pulse my Ashley’s sister’s boyfriend canceled on her and I suggested that you’ll go with me."
I sigh and then said fine."
After he left, I walked Jenny, my dog to the park. Once I was at the park, I sat on the bench and untied her. When Jenny ran crazy, I kept my eye on her. I then started thinking of Ashley’s sister. I was trying to picture her but my phone rang. end of chapter 4** I'm suggesting tht u fix chapter 4 like this becuz this is where I got confused becuz the passage in chapter 3 was attached to chapter 4 as well can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Make sure u don't post the same chapter twice becuz in the last chapter it was the same chapter as three and I was rather confused on what chapter was what anyhoo i like the story can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)