OH MY GOD THIS IS AMAZING I SWEAR I JUST WAOW It's so nice to read a fanfic that it so well written, like it was an actual published story:) I hope you do update it!
this is so great and I love you so much and this is my new favourite story ever and you are my new favourite writer ever. Buttsmut and awkward noises. ;___;<3
HAHAHAHAA THAT WAS SO MUCH WORSE THAN I WAS EXPECTING BUT IT WAS STILL SO HILARIOUS THAT THE NOISES I MADE WEREN'T HUMAN And I just realized how awkward and unnecessary my name is to type out.. It looked way cooler when I made it. BUT OH WELL, I'll keep writing comments so you have to keep typing it out.
I love this chapter SO much! They're so adorable I just can't even process this. But honestly, do random kinky butt smut fillers. :D I love this story too much.