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  • weeezer100

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    @ Spacifix
    Thank you I'll try make my next one longer!
    September 8th, 2012 at 01:27pm
  • Spacifix

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    I have to agree with Kaitlyn these chapters are really really short.
    September 8th, 2012 at 08:02am
  • Spacifix

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    I have to agree with Kaitlyn these chapters are really really short.
    September 8th, 2012 at 08:02am
  • kaitlyn5056

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    Hello there, I was brought here by comment swap.
    Anyways, there's not much to critique on considering the fact that what you have written so far is quite short, but I'll manage. Your punctuation and capaitalization is great, and your words give the reader a good picture of what's happening. Great job so far. Keep writing.
    September 4th, 2012 at 10:28pm
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