Don't Cross the Streams - Comments

(My last comment was for chapter 1) (2) Loved the conversation she had with Luna. I had at first thought that Flit's mom was Luna, but now I'm wondering even more. Descriptions were awesome and can't wait to read the next chapter. Wondering when is the next chapter going to be posted? Subscribing and recommending.

(2) Might want to reread this one again and fix the spelling and misplaced words errors. Other than that, wondering what her plan to get back at James would be. The descriptions of everything is great and I like how she and Malfoy's son are spending time with each other. Wondering what that regret is that Draco experienced? Can't wait to read the next chapter.

From comment swap and kinda surprised that there is only one comment so far. This story is amazing and I love the descriptions. So will less than five letters be sent to her home or will she have to spend time with her aunts and uncles? Guessing you proof-read this seeing as there are some commas now. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Here from comment swap.
FIrst, I think you generally have a good thing here, but you should proof read and fix a few grammatical and spelling errors. There's no commas, so the sentences are a bit awkward which makes the story harder to flow. Anyways, I do like where you are going with this, but I suggest you get a beta reader!

-Jess xx