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  • Thatmom

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    Time for both of them to face each other and talk it out like grown ups!!!
    May 20th, 2015 at 01:42am
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    Andrew is a jerk. He knew he was pissing Jon off!!! Jon is a BIGGER jerk!!!!
    May 15th, 2015 at 10:07pm
  • Hawkchick85

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    I love them together.... and I really love that she's not a toothpick model.... I love her complaining about the sand.... who doesn't hate that lol. Great Job I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS
    May 11th, 2015 at 06:51am
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    :)
    May 10th, 2015 at 10:37pm
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    They are just adorable together!!!
    April 30th, 2015 at 09:22am
  • Hawkchick85

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    I'm so glad that they made it official..... they are so adorable together. Thanks so much for updating. PMS
    April 26th, 2015 at 11:20pm
  • Hawkchick85

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    I'm so glad that they made it official..... they are so adorable together. Thanks so much for updating. PMS
    April 26th, 2015 at 11:20pm
  • Hawkchick85

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    I'm so glad that they made it official..... they are so adorable together. Thanks so much for updating. PMS
    April 26th, 2015 at 11:20pm
  • Hawkchick85

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    I'm so glad that they made it official..... they are so adorable together. Thanks so much for updating. PMS
    April 26th, 2015 at 11:20pm
  • Hawkchick85

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    I just found this and I totally love it!!! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS
    April 19th, 2015 at 05:36am
  • Thatmom

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    So happy her parents approve!!!
    April 17th, 2015 at 09:30am
  • Thatmom

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    I think a lot of people fake their confidence. I am usually sick with nerves before any big event, meeting new people, dates but as soon as I'm in the situation I just throw my shoulders back and put on a smile whether I'm really feeling it or not. Great chapter!!!
    April 13th, 2015 at 11:16pm
  • Piper13_89

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    Liking this story looking forward to more
    April 11th, 2015 at 04:01am
  • CharDeeMacDennis

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    You just have to give Shawzy a chance! Haha.
    April 10th, 2015 at 01:20pm
  • Thatmom

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    Patrick the matchmaker!!! Love it:)
    April 10th, 2015 at 12:57am
  • thisismydivision

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    Is this a new favourite fic I smell? Yes I believe it is! I love it!
    April 10th, 2015 at 12:11am
  • CharDeeMacDennis

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    I loooooooooooove that you I cooperated Shawzy into this! I have a huge soft spot for him and I just asdfghjkl;

    Update soon!! I love it already :)
    April 7th, 2015 at 05:54am
  • Thatmom

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    Great start!!!
    April 6th, 2015 at 02:26pm
  • beautiful sorta

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    I really like what you've posted so far. It's a nice change from most of the Blackhawk-centric I've read. Your story has a lot of potential and I can't wait to see what you post next. :)
    April 4th, 2015 at 01:46am
  • LoveGame13

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    Very nice! Looking forward to more.
    April 3rd, 2015 at 06:14am