Mascara and Eyeliner - Comments

Comment swap sent me. :]

Cute little one shot. I don't know about about One Direction, so I can't really review the content, but you have a clean writing style. Watch your punctuation, and you may wanna update the layout. Other than that, good job!

Hey,I found your story through comment swap,but am glad I did. I love One Direction fanfiction,but can never seem to find any good kind on here! Yours was definetly an expectation. Right away,I was hooked into your story. Your story flows easily and kept me going and interested. The only problem is with little things, like capitalizing a few things and commas and what not,but besides that it's really good. Already subscribed, can't wait to read more!