When a Tornado Meets a Volcano - Comments

  • daisylove

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    Can you please continue this story? Please please please?! :)
    June 6th, 2013 at 09:06am
  • daisylove

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    ohh myy god! i absolutely loved this chapter. i seriously cannot wait for the next update! update soon please :)
    September 15th, 2012 at 07:21am
  • daisylove

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    i already love this story and i cant wait to read more! please continue writing this :)
    September 8th, 2012 at 09:53am
  • Gred-and-Forge

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    This is a great start! I really like it and think it'll turn out to be a really good story.
    There were a few errors though, just missing words here and there and a few grammatical errors but it's still great Mr. Green
    September 4th, 2012 at 12:54am