When She Cries - Comments

  • A7x fan FoREVer

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    I love this :) I really hope that she would open up to the gus and would start to speak.
    April 27th, 2014 at 10:17pm
  • foreversmiling2198

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    this story is soooo amazing! you're an incredible writer, the way you describe your characters make them seem so real. The story is very well written, I couldn't find any grammar mistakes, and its also very capitvating. Once you start reading it, its almost impossible to stop... Though if I had to say something that I would change it would be the color of the summary on the summary page. The grey lettering makes it difficult to read against the base of the snow globe, but thats all. Over all this story is simply amazing, keep up the good work.
    April 14th, 2013 at 02:44am
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    great new chapter!! Very Happy
    December 19th, 2012 at 02:45am
  • Castaway_Of_Suburbia

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    This is getting really good.In the future do you think that someone will find out about Lyric's busies??
    December 15th, 2012 at 05:45pm
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    @ ZombieToast
    Awe thank you that means a ton to me and yeah there is lots to come I hope to update tomorrow.
    December 2nd, 2012 at 11:26am
  • ZombieToast

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    This story is simply just too amazing. I've seen a lot of people try to write stories like this but yours is the only one I have seen that is so thouroghly done, I hope there will be more in the near future. :-)

    ~New Subscriber
    November 28th, 2012 at 06:52pm
  • xXcrazy-desiXx

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    @ ForeverARedHead
    Thank you your comment touched my heart and means a ton.
    November 24th, 2012 at 01:03am
  • Evil.Red.Head

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    The story is very powerful, the first few paragraphs drag you in towards reading more, the tension between her and the parents is what pulled me in. It's a bit difficult to read because the paragraphs are kinda all sunk together but the plot itself and the way you write, it's amazing. I definitly think you should continue writing, you have a really great gift with telling a story, so keep up the great work!
    November 12th, 2012 at 05:06pm
  • KillJoySynner

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    More soon please!!!:D
    September 8th, 2012 at 04:58am
  • LynShiningStar

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    Love it!
    September 5th, 2012 at 06:57am
  • kierstlovesyou

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    Loved the new chapter :))
    September 5th, 2012 at 01:04am
  • mck828

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    love the chapter thank you for updating
    September 4th, 2012 at 05:30am
  • kierstlovesyou

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    Love it !!! Can't wait to see what happens :)
    September 4th, 2012 at 04:27am
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    @ mck828
    give me an half an hour and you will know :) thank you for commenting it means a ton.
    September 4th, 2012 at 04:18am
  • mck828

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    Cant wait to see what happens with Zacky and Lyric
    September 4th, 2012 at 04:11am