comment swap this story is soooo amazing! you're an incredible writer, the way you describe your characters make them seem so real. The story is very well written, I couldn't find any grammar mistakes, and its also very capitvating. Once you start reading it, its almost impossible to stop... Though if I had to say something that I would change it would be the color of the summary on the summary page. The grey lettering makes it difficult to read against the base of the snow globe, but thats all. Over all this story is simply amazing, keep up the good work.
This story is simply just too amazing. I've seen a lot of people try to write stories like this but yours is the only one I have seen that is so thouroghly done, I hope there will be more in the near future. :-)
The story is very powerful, the first few paragraphs drag you in towards reading more, the tension between her and the parents is what pulled me in. It's a bit difficult to read because the paragraphs are kinda all sunk together but the plot itself and the way you write, it's amazing. I definitly think you should continue writing, you have a really great gift with telling a story, so keep up the great work!