One More Night - Comments

I had this bookmarked to read after I'd done a little bit of writing but I made the mistake, or not, of clicking on the first chapter and I got sucked in and read all seven chapters!

I loved it, the banter between Alice and Brian was hilarious! The friendship between Alice and Jess is brilliantly beautiful and the hot sex was hawt!

I probably should get some writing done now but fuck it, I'ma read the sequel! :D

Great story. Loved the ending. The picture at the end of the last chapter was hilarious too lol. Where's that from?

Aww, what a cute end to the story. Glad she finally got her shit sorted out and went to meet him on the tour... and she took Alice, which was a great way to solve the problem of not wanting to leave her home alone.

A cute little story, with great humour throughout and well worth the read. Maybe we might see a sequel with a love interest for Alice? As they say, it's a thin line between love and hate... so maybe her and Brian could hook up. Hahaha.

Anyways, congrats on this cute story and look forward to seeing more from you.

Wow. I loved this. I liked the love fest between Matt and Jess, but seriously, the bantering between Alice and Brian just killed me..so fucking funny. I really thing you should do a spin off with those two...I know she said she pictured doing many things to him, but none of them were sexual, but I dont believe it...there is sexual tension there for sure!!

Love! Love! Love!

Perfect ending. I laughed so much at some of the lines you had in there, from teasing Brian to teasing Matt and me.
This was awesome. Thank you so much hun! We're both diamonds! :D

Well thank god she finally got off her ass and went, even though I'm kinda annoyed at her that she would have chosen not to go if Alice didn't go. Can't go through life constantly having to hold someone's hand.

The last bit was hilarious about fornication in the bunks. I was kinda expecting Alice and Brian to get it on with each other, but they might kill each other in the process lol.

I remember seeing that concert footage and did giggle about Syn only needing a minute - brought back memories of a guy I dated lol

i thought she was unsure to go on the tour because she didn't want to leave her friend, so why is her friend there with her? Seemed like a pointless argument they had to be honest. I like the story, just thought that bit was a lil silly.

ME GUSTA!! *claps hands and whistles* After much dilly dallying, we're finally together! WOO! Odin, it was rough, I almost gave up on me doing the right thing, but then you came through and yay, it was great :D

I loved this so much, the playfulness you threw in there with how we naturally are around each other, the bickering between you and Brian, which by the way was freaking hilarious. And just, ugh all this awesomeness from you to me. That makes it all the more awesome.

Thank you so much for writing this for me, you had no need to, but you did and I love it and i love you and skrubgwrg *smishes* Happy Endings!
Can't wait for the very last part!! :D
THANK YOU!

Well, I was initially confused as to why Alice was so pissed with Jess... but then when she explained it, I understood. I'd be pissed off if my friend was acting the way Jess is, too. It's starting to seem a little like she's causing drama for no real reason... she wanted Matt, she's got him, now she's finding any excuse to not go. I get she doesn't want to leave her friend alone and she doesn't want to mess up anything, but she's not even trying to find compromises... it's all or nothing.

I hope if she decides to go, she sticks with it and doesn't mess him around. Friends are important, yes... but if she can't put her love for Matt first, they wont end up with much of a relationship.

Lol I loved the ranga bit - my brother has a ginger cat called "Ranga" :p

I hope Alice got through the mush that Jess calls brains and that she chooses to go with Matt for a while, otherwise she is going to end up regretting it and then she'll be all hostile to him when he moves on thinking that she doesn't love him

Ranga. Bahahahahaha.
I was all sad when you were ignoring me I wanted be all *kitten eyes* and pleading whimpers and such but nope. And you were all angry and Brian, omg, lmfao, Brian was great XD Thank you for bringing him into it and making you two fight, that was great XD
You know what you need to do? You need to have a chapter with you and Brian and you whining about how I'm being a dick and how I better go and how you'll be sad and alone when we're all gone and he's like "come with us." and you're both just playing and you're like "don't even joke loser," and he's like "I'm not." and puts the controller down and gets all serious and is like "seriously, come with us. You're part of the gang and we can't leave you behind. Besides, who the fuck am I going to play COD with when Matt's off pounding away at Jess? Johnny? Yeah right. Come with." And so you decide that fuck it, yes you will go and Idk how, but maybe you're at the airport with them and I'm not there yet and you're like "I'll kill her" and Matt's like *is sullen kitten* and Brian's like "I really thought she'd come, you know?" and then the airports like "all aboard motherfuckers." and everyone gets up to get on the plane and you al take your seats and shit and Matt's all with an empty seat next to him and then I burst onto the plane and am all like "No body panic, I'm here!" and Matt's like and you're like "The fuck dude, I thought you weren't coming! You asshole!" and I'm like "Loki'd?" or something and idk, I'm rambling XD
lol.
I LOVED IT! More soon please and thank you :D

Ah, so it was Matt who spilled the beans first. And although I was disappointed she didn't say it straight back, I understand that the moment was ruined and she was probably extremely caught off guard, so that's fair enough.

Well, the sex in the living room was unexpected. Lucky her roommate didn't end her call prematurely, or she would've seen stuff she probably wouldn't have liked. I mean, no one wants to walk in on that... haha.

Her reaction to him asking her to go on tour was a little over-dramatic, to be honest. I mean, I get that it's a big deal due to work, bills and just general life... but it wasn't like he was asking her to move to another state or something. It's a tour... she doesn't have to do the entire tour, just some of it at least would probably suffice. Hopefully she gets over her little tantrum and joins Matt, otherwise it will be something she'll regret for a long time.

Y U NO GO WITH HIM IDIOT?!
If I don't rock up at the airport and be all "Loki'd!" I'm going to be so pissed with myself. Fuck my job, fuck my house, fuck my bills, cage up my cat, sling you under my arm and MARCH TO THAT FUCKING AIRPORT!!


Loved it. But all kujsrbgujwrbujqbgjqrbgjqrgb about being a douche to Matt XD
Now excuse me while I go pack haha.

I loved the chapter, up until Jess turned into a fuckwit. Holy hell, go with him before you lose him you asshat lol

another fucking amazing chapter. Oh dear, seriously now what?
Look, Jess or either you go with him or I will make you go, child!

I must have missed the notification for the second update or something, coz I started reading the third one and I was like, wait, what? Hahaha.

But anyways, I like the way you did the second chapter. I sincerely thought she was just having herself a hot, naughty dream.. but nope! They're fuck buddies. Well, whilst I understand the concept and convenience of the situation, she surely has herself in a bad position. I mean, it'd be find if she didn't have feelings for him, but since she does, it's a wonder she can go through with sleeping with him and not slipping up with her emotions. I certainly couldn't do it

COD.. man, that game... my boyfriend's obsession. Whilst I don't mind playing Zombies with him every now and then, the hardcore team death matches are a little much for my level of experience. I panic too much and end up dying as a result. Hahaha.

Alice's birthday present reaction was just hilarious. Personally I don't understand refusing birthday gifts, but I'm glad she finally accepted hers and loved them. It was cute.

Oh... snap! Someone spilled their guts... but I'm unsure who said it... I assume Matt, but maybe it slipped out of her mouth? Wonder if whoever said it will back it up or act like it was something they just said in the heat of the moment.. hmmm....

loved it!!! ans seriously that would be such a sweet birthday gift...except for the fucking lockout right now...grrr. lol.
Again, loved this though, and that bit at the end was hot!

Aww fucking shit! Hell yeah!
Let's do a victory dance! xD hahaha

You're going to Hulk Smash my vagina?
But I need it!!
Happy birthday, lets go to the hockey and you get the drinks while Matt and I fuck in the bathroom!
And he loves me!

If that Johnathan guy doesn't notice you and totally skate over and flirt and sign your jersey and offer to buy you drinks, I'll leave. Nope.
It needs to happen.
I freaking loved this honey!! It never fails to make me laugh XD
More soon please and thank you :D

Wowe, this chapter. this story... is so fucking good. hottie awesome sex! :D haha more soon :33