Our Baby - Comments

Love the updates!!!

I am madly inlove with this story. It's so different and compelling. keep it up!!!!!!!!! can't wait for the update

I cant wait to read more!!! epppppp

Much improvement. However, this sentence baffles me.

"You aren't here, so Matt and I can take your baby." It was spoken by Val. I was just wondering if she was implying that they were only helping her so that she would give them her baby. Cause by the way it's worded, that's exactly how it sounds.

I really loved the update honey. I can't wait to read more of this <3

This is so great! That would be awesome and sweet if Kenzi gave her baby to them! Can't wait for more updates :D

I really hope she goes through with giving the baby to then so she has a.chance to get her life on track...anyways thanks for the update! I cant wait for more! :)

The idea is really good. Definitely different. Be careful of your spelling and grammar. I'm not trying to be mean, but also be sure to stay in one tense. Switching back and forth between past and present makes it confusing to read. But I like it so far. :)

I'm glad that Matt & Val want to help her. I hope Kenzi can get off crack and get her light on track! Loved this update, I have to admit, I teared up a little.

Overall I loved this chapter and I can't wait for more. Please update again real soon sweets.

I have to say I am liking this so far. It's by far something different that i've read. Keep it up and can't wait for more <3