Broken Arrow - Comments

@MoMo92 There ya go, five new chapters :P

@MoMo_92 They're still coming, I just need to find the time to post and do all the coding. Should be in the next day or two, sorry, I have work and stuff. Bear with me!!

@MoMo_92 Two new chapters coming at you shortly!!

I've missed so much

@Maliella94 WELL OF COURSE WE HAVEN'T DRUNK TOGETHER IN AGES SO WAS I SUPPOSED TO KNOW? :P

MORE SLUT

ALSO HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME SHOT TEQUILA WITH LEMON AND SALT! I DO IT STRAIGHT AMIGO!

@MoMo_92 I know it's been a year, but, I'm back? Ha...

I would love it if u finished this story I had to reread the story from a random chapter to remember y I loved it in the first place sooo please come back and finish this story :)

So I just reread the story to remind myself about the story. I'd love to see you finish it. I want to see if she ends up trying to find another guy to pleasure her or if she's actually going to give into Brian when he's being a cocky asshole and bringing home whores when he's upset with her.

I cant' wait until you update and I'm glad that you got your motivation back to write more out it. I'll wait as long as possible for you to update because your first chapter back should be awesome like this story.

@ MoMo_92
Thank you, I will try to get back into it, I just need time. If I force my writing, it won't come out right.

I completely understand tht u want to stop writing becuz u lost ur motivational spirit, just kno I will be waiting when u get ur motivation back becuz u r an amazing writer and this story is awesome :)

@ SarcasticNightmare
I definitely won't take it down, I'll leave it here on the very small chance that I may one day return. But at this stage, if I do return to Mibba, it'll be when I get back into writing original fiction. I appreciate you understanding. :)

I'm really glad you've moved past all of the feelings and gotten over it. I completely understand that you don't want to write anymore and if the motivation isn't there, you shouldn't have to do it to appease other people. I really like your story and hope you'll leave it posted even if you don't end up finishing it. Sorry if this comment is totally random, but I wanted to mention it.

Ooo Brian's being bad. Can't wait to read more.

@ Shazza Rose
You're very welcome :)
I'm glad to be of some use! Haha. They definitely paid off, this is one of only few stories on here where I find the characters to be really believable. And the risk paid off too, I enjoyed it! Very much looking forward to the next instalment! :D

@ RachTheBat_
Wow! Thank you so much! Really! That comment made me smile and feel accomplished as a writer! I'm currently working on the next chapter and came on Mibba to see how long it'd been since I last updated (nearly a month, I am sooo sorry!!) but your comment's just boosted my writing mojo so thank you!! I'm glad to hear I've written Brian well enough that he's believable, shows that all the countless hours watching interviews and the numerous times I've watched All Excess and just studied his personality have paid off!! I was a little iffy about writing the masturbation scene, but I figured "fuck it, take a risk, see how the readers respond to it" it's new territory for me, I've written smut before, plenty, but that was a new thing for me. Long response to your long comment, and thanks again!!

Okay, so I've just read this from start to finish and I love it!! God the tension between them... sheesh! Lol. I didn't read the story before it was rewritten, so I can't comment on that, but I'm glad you dragged it out and took their budding relationship slowly. It can get quite tedious at times when characters jump into bed too quickly and there's unnecessary drama because they're fucking already. I like how you've written it so far. And, can I just say, you write Brian exceptionally well! I can imagine him perfectly in this story, I like the banter between them, its hilarious at times! I really love their bond too, its lovely. Wow, that last chapter was a bit hot wasn't it?! Phew! I can feel myself blushing! Haha. This is really well written, lots of detail and descriptive language, but not too much. You have the right balance between dialogue and detail. I really like it and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow, long comment is long! Lol. I shall bid you good day, I am going now to dream of Mr Gates ;)

Ruby it's time to play dirty can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

i think ruby needs to play brian's game back at him like tease him the way he did her because if he knows she wants him then she should realize he wants her as well