This was incredibly cute. I love it a lot. Great work 
October 5th, 2012 at 02:28pm
Let me just start off by saying: Cute picture of John. Quite fitting for him.
I love Noelle. Not gonna lie. Her mindset is amusing but interesting at the same time. Her little banter to herself (or the journal, if the inanimate object is supposed to represent a person) is the best part of this piece in my opinion.
My favorite section was when she discussed how not everything needs to be defined, and how everything doesn't have to be searched for or discovered. I think I loved it so much because I completely agree with what Noelle had written (okay, what YOU had written) and it's quite the theory that has been talked about before. Anywho, on to your entry.
"I love the world. I just hate everyone who lives in it. Call me a cynic but that's just who I am....That line was so cliche. Sorry, Journal."
I loved that line. I reread it like, a thousand times and I don't even know why. It was a great line and definitely describes the majority of people I feel like. Kudos.
And man. John and Noelle's relationship is envy worthy. I want that relationship with someone more than I think I want a hedgehog. And that's hard to accomplish. Their relationship is just so easy and simple but you know that these two know what they want out of each other. And dude, do I wish they would just get together or something. I don't know if that the direction you were heading in, and even if it wasn't, this is definitely one of the best John Ohh stories I have read to date.
Amazing one-shot. I just don't have the words to say what else I feel inside. I even subscribed to this so I can read it again.