How Long Is Forever? - Comments

  • deathXbeforeXdisco

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    Well, I'm not a One Direction fan at all(I'm more... metal/punk/rock), but this is cute :)
    The layout is absolutely gorgeous, and I like how you've written the story so far, with 'flashbacks' so to speak and present time.
    I'm sorry to hear your work got plaigarised. Did you report them?
    Other than that, I think you've made some good characters and they're real and believable which is the basis to any story.
    P.S. Grace is the cutest little kid ever!
    June 28th, 2015 at 04:21pm
  • MistyXMeaner

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    I, like a few other, am not a One Direction fan at all. But it wasn't too bad at all! There are a few issues with grammar and tenses that I have noticed but nothing too major. You might want to get someone to proof read it for you. Apart from that I thought the story was good :)
    August 16th, 2014 at 07:13pm
  • A Decade in the Sun

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    I'm not a One Direction fan and so I wasn't looking forward to this. It was a pleasant surprise, really. I love the layout, it reminds me of a wedding which is fitting for the story. In the first chapter I noticed a few problems with the present and past tense, but nothing else :)
    June 16th, 2013 at 04:28pm
  • justSJ

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    I hope you update more soon! Smile
    April 20th, 2013 at 09:17am
  • smilekidd

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    Comment Swap sent me here, I have agree with the commenter below about the background. It's really pretty, and simple. It's nice. The story overall was really nice. I normally don't read One Direction stories, but this is one that I'll keep up on! c:
    March 31st, 2013 at 06:43am
  • justSJ

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    I hope you update soon! Mr. Green
    March 28th, 2013 at 07:26am
  • justSJ

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    I hope you update soon! :)
    February 24th, 2013 at 07:32am
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    Comment Swapper here. I love this background. It's very feminine, pretty, and easy to read. I love this story, I like One Direction but I haven't read a story with them that really interested me. It was really cute and the last chapter almost made me cry. Some spelling errors but overall a very good story.
    January 11th, 2013 at 07:59pm
  • Red Guitar

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    I don't think this story can handle anymore cuteness any more. <3 <3
    December 23rd, 2012 at 02:02pm
  • Red Guitar

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    I don't think this story can handle anymore cuteness any more. <3 <3
    December 23rd, 2012 at 02:02pm
  • Red Guitar

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    You seriously need to update soon! Harry Styles, my bby. He's so adorable and i love him so much. I love the background and i love Grace (big and small) so much too.
    December 23rd, 2012 at 02:02pm
  • DuckyDuck

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    Comment Swap!
    First off, I really love the background. It is very simple and it is just really pretty. I think this is a great story. I'm very excited for more. I never thought I would fall in love with a boy from One Direction(my friend Kayla would die if she saw me say that). But I really love the way you present your characters. Some spelling errors but I can understand what you are saying and look past them. I so cannot wait for you to add more. Simply wonderful
    November 4th, 2012 at 02:30am
  • honeyjoons

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    Firstly, I love the layout. It's simple and not too plain or assaulting on the eyes. For the story, I love it! Poor Harry though! Stories like these always breamy heart. Grace is so cute though! I love her inquisitive nature. I did spot some spelling errors but, we are all guilty of that! I simply love this.
    October 21st, 2012 at 03:33pm
  • Carpe Diem !

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    Another crunch bar here. Oh my gosh I love this story and I'm totally in love with grace! I love how they have to try and resist her puppy eyes and the way Harry interacts with her makes me melt inside! Absolutely wonderful job and I look forward to you continuing this!
    October 15th, 2012 at 10:35pm
  • GoodGirl;

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    Please continue!! This is amazing! I fellin love with Grace , both of them, and Haz this way....this is really good
    October 15th, 2012 at 01:43pm
  • GoodGirl;

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    This looks awesome! The layout is gorgeous
    October 15th, 2012 at 01:33pm
  • valleydream

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    Oh my It's so cute but sad too
    October 10th, 2012 at 01:06am
  • valleydream

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    Oh my It's so cute but sad too
    October 10th, 2012 at 01:06am
  • Randomnesshappens95

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    Continue with this story! :D
    October 9th, 2012 at 11:12pm
  • AppleCider92

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    I think you should definitely continue the story. For all I know, the way you tell the story is probably alot better than the other person's. I really love this story, it makes me think that when Harry finally has children, he would act just like this. Keep it up! :)
    October 9th, 2012 at 06:31pm