Lonely Boy - Comments

I WILL GO DOWN WITH MY SHIP
none of you losers can stop me
Rhett & Mila 5eva

RHETT OKAY YOU ARE A SWEETIE PIE
i find that note extremely adorable
i think i might have cried
mila, run to him
RUN TO HIM AND LOVE HIM

aweh man rhett, let me love u

oh jeez
man down
i repeat
man down

rhett
mila
come here both of you
ugh LET ME HOLD YOU AND FEED YOU THEN LOCK YOU IN A CLOSET UNTIL YOU MAKE UP
cryin
srsly tho
stop keeping mila and rhett apart okay
pls
pretty pls
RHETT STOP IT STOP IT STOP IT STOP IT pls

WHAT
WHAT
RHETT
RHETT STOP IT
I want to say "bOY YOU STUPID" but also "I feel you" and I just want to hug Mila I can feel her heart break from my screen just ugh ♥

MILA AND RHETT FOREVER
I'M SHIPPING IT ALREADY
NOPE CAN'T STOP ME
what's done is done

grey eyes hm
interesting
angsty boys that like making out have grey eyes
JUST SAYIN'~

GIRL
COME HERE
EAT SOME ICE CREAM IT'S OKAY

OH MY GOSH
MILA'S MOM
she's onto us mila shoot
BUT AW RHETT BABY LET ME HOLD YOU
WHY YOU MISSIN' APPOINTMENTS
DON'T YOU KNOW THAT CUTE GIRLS ARE WAITING TO HAVE TEA AND READ BOOKS WITH YOU LIKE
DAMN
smh

MILA
we're like peas in a pod
i can't talk to cute boys who i make awkward eye contact in doctor's offices with either okay i don't know how other people do it
BUT I'M SURE YOU LOOK ADORABLE OKAY HE'LL LOVE YOU AND YOU'LL RIDE OFF INTO THE SUNSET TOGETHER ON HIS MOTORCYCLE NAMED CLEMENTINE
what am i saying omg

AND SO IT BEGINS
why am i nervous omg it's not my story
le sigh

rhett
honey darling
baby
come here
talk to mila okay
what's wrong??????
:c

OH MY GOD
IS THAT A DATE
IT'S A DATE
RHETT
AND
MILA
ARE ON A DATE
crying
i remember when they used to awkwardly look at each other aw they grow up so fast~
but rhett
honey seriously
WHAT HAPPENED?
and the butterflies
GIRL CONTROL THOSE BUTTERFLIES BEFORE THEY CONTROL YOU AND FLY YOU AWAY FROM CUTIE McCUTIEPANTS OVER THERE OKAY

he's making progress
into my heart omg
MILA STOP ASKIN' QUESTIONS YOU DON'T WANNA KNOW THE ANSWER TO GIRL THAT'S HOW BAD THINGS HAPPEN

oh snap
the big one-oh
SO WE HAVE PROGRESS TO THE HOLDING OF THE HANDS
excellent

HE'S GOT GOOSEBUMPS FROM YOU GIRL
SNAP CRACKLE
and he likes peanut butter cups
I also enjoy them
obviously it's a match made in heaven and we're soulmates so~
le shrug

OH
MY
GOSH
he talks to his mom about mila
HOW CUTE IS THAT
OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS I WANNA PINCH HIS CHEEKS AND FEED HIM COOKIES NOW UGH
and they're talking all night
best ship ever yep

baby
honey
COME HERE
/cries
it's okay rhett it's okay
MILA GIRL YOU BEST BE GOOD TO HIM OKAY

aw mila
YOU SO GOOD TO HIM
GIRL
YOU GET A HIGH FIVE FOR BEIN' AWESOME
FOUR FOR YOU, MILA COCO
wait
hold up
alice why you keepin' secrets from mila
SHE'S LIKE FAMILY OKAY
YOUR SON AND HER SHARE MOMENTS AT THE PARK AND ON THE PHONE AND THINGS
hrumph
OH SNAP CRACKLE
RHETT BABY WHY
wait what's a short watch
hm.

RHETT STOP IT
YOU STOP IT THIS INSTANT
MILA COCO WAS GOOD TO YOU OKAY
SHE MADE YOU SOUP
SHE HELD YOUR HAND
YOU MADE HER SMILE
well duh rhett okay what did you think her mother meant
okay okay maybe that's a low blow but RHETT BABY STOP DON'T DO THIS TO MY SHIP
GOSH I HAD SO MANY PLANS
NOOOOOOOOO
excuse me as i fall and weep dramatically over what could have been
MILA GIRL
COME HERE
LET'S WATCH MEAN GIRLS AND EAT SOME ICE CREAM
IT''LL BE OKAY
le very heavy sigh

Basically, this story is wonderful and I love it very, very much. I think you've done a wonderful job with it and I honestly can't wait to see where it goes. c:

So I noticed that this story hasn't been commented in a few days AND I THINK THAT'S A DAMN SHAME, so I'm going to go and write you a super awesome comment for every chapter okay~

Oh my gosh, this is so adorable. I love this story so much. I truly appreciate that it isn't too fast paced, becuase it makes it so much more realistic in how teenage love is. Rhett and Mila just seem so innocent and he seems perfectly lovely. The short chapters are a huge plus too, becuase I have a small attention span... Overall, I give you an A+ please update soon.

This is the cutest thing ever. I love that the chapters are short because like lungsmoke pointed out, it really fits in with the sweetness of this story. When I saw Mila's name, I couldn't help but think of Mila Kunis I love the way that this is written and I'm already in love with Rhett, though I do wonder why he sees a psych. I also love the growing relationship of Rhett and Mila, you've captured the essence of teenage love really well. I hope you do update soon, because I've really fallen for this story! Subbing and reccing

This is so cute. I love the length of the chapters because it's fitting. It's short and sweet which is kind of like the story except the story's actually not that short. I love how the chapters are written in a way so that I personally am not dying to know what's the matter with Rhett (although I can feel Mila's frustration, and I love the lil moments Mila has with her mum and because I'm biased that way I think there ought to be more of those ).

I love how Mila describes how she's feeling when she's around Rhett, like the perpetual butterflies and the uncertainty. It's kind of like teenage love at its finest. Also I'm very glad that you updated. <3

Yay! Please continue updating when you have the chance!

this is cute!

this is cute!

Yay, you updated! :D

preciousness i can't take it. can't wait for more! <3

Mila is like my soul animal

I love this. ^_^

just keep it coming :))

Ohhmygod!! You updated yay! I love this story! Update again soon, pretty please!! :D