Revenge - Comments

Gothique4 has it totally right. I was laughing just reading all this and just about died from laughing so hard! Between this one and Fallout of a Bet, my sides are aching!

Oh those were just so great! I can totally see Matt strutting around the stage with some drag queen groupies just loving him up! Oh yeah awesome one-shots!

Oh lord I absolutely love this and I think I was laughing just as hard as the guys at poor Matt looking like one of the Village People dancing around to Rihanna.

I think I would literally pay to see Matt flanked by drag queens up on stage. Maybe we should start a campaign to have the Scream dancers replaced with drag queens :p

Silly boy really needs to learn that he shouldn't really bet Brian - that boy's a sore loser lol

And now to comment and read the sequel. I can't believe it's taken me this long to give these a read.... usually I'm better at staying on top of this shit. =/ hahah. Plus I love that it's called Revenge. I just want to know, what the hell are they betting on that makes them have such high stakes??!

“This is fucked up,” Matt grumbled as he reluctantly climbed into the passenger seat of the rental car.
“Man, I told you not to do it. He wasn’t gonna lose again,” Zacky replied, a smirk gracing his pierced lips as he slid into the drivers seat.
“That bet was bullshit. He fucking cheated,” Matt growled, folding his arms over his chest and glaring through the windshield.

Oh, what a sore loser!!! Mattie needs to learn to accept his terms without whining! hahaha.

“How do you know there’s a lot around back?” Matt asked, turning his head to look at the younger man.
“We came here earlier today, to make arrangements,” Johnny responded, a cheesy grin on his face as the other guys chuckled.
“Arrangements?! What the hell does that mean?!” Matt grunted, his eyes growing wide as he stared daggers at Johnny.

HAHAHAHA, somehow I just don't believe Johnny when he says that it's jsut cuz they arrived that day for the arrangements. I bet he's a regular. Poor Matt... I must admit, arrangements does sound kinda shady but then again, what isn't shady about these loser consquences of this weird betting system that Brian and Matt seem to have.

Matt had already been served and was downing a shot of what looked to be straight bourbon, followed by two more before he chased it up with a beer and held his hand out for service again.

I find it funny that he needs to get hammered in order to perform on the stage... granted, it's a different stage than he's usually accustomed to but still, a performance is a performance, even when it's humiliating. hahaha

“You’ve got a lot better chance of getting lucky here than you would at a strip club,” Zacky smirked, earning a round of hearty laughs at the bass player’s expense.

haha, poor Johnny. The sad thing is that I'm inclined to agree with Zacky on that observation. haha

YES!!! the moment I saw the first "Na na na come on", I nearly died inside from excitement. hahahah. You went the right route with "S&M". I think his outfit is just adorable for a man of his stature. hahaha. It just reminds me of those really hardcore gays that are into all the leather and the chains and stuff... all he needs is a Freddie Mercury mustache and the look would be complete. hahahah

“We could make so much money off that video… do you know how many people would pay to see Matt dressed in leather singing about S&M?!” Jimmy cackled, slamming his hand down on the table and wiping away a tear from his eye.
“Nah, this video is just for friends and family… and maybe for the wedding reception whenever he gets married, just to give the in-laws an insight into what they’re letting into their family,” Brian smirked, his delight at watching Matt having to go through a similar humiliation that he himself had to impossible to contain.

Jimmy's quite right.... all the fans would pay top dollar for such high quality entertainment. hahaha. I know I would. =] I'm just glad that someone's recording it cuz that would be the most amusing thing to watch at a wedding reception where Matt's the groom. hahaha. Just imagining the looks of all the bride's relatives.... hahaha

HAHA, YES!!! One of the queens smacked his bottom with a whip while he was bent over!!!! That's amazing. haha. I was waiting for that to happen! It's probably a good thing that by this point, Matt's alcohol is starting to kick in so it won't hurt that much. haha

“Great job, sugar, you should consider a career change,” one of the dancers praised, her voice a lot deeper than Matt had expected.

Both Brian and Matt should make career changes. Brian can be like Magic Mike with his stripper moves while Matt continues to work the gay circut... it helps that both of them have those amazing bods that boy women and men want in erotic performers. hahaha. Maybe the two of them can work out a routine together. OMG, that would be amazingly hilarious. They both lose another bet with someone else and have to do soemthing together! I can just imagine all the dancing and the outfits now.... and the humiliation. =] That needs to happen! Please make that happen! =] hahaha. It can be the final installment of a trilogy. hahah

Overall, I enjoyed reading these one-shots. They were really funny and definitely played on things I've thought about with all the A7X members. I'm so glad you wrote these. haha. There's plenty here to entertain me whenever I'm feeling bored.