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  • butterfly lovers.

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    I've been meaning to read this (or just Skins fanfiction in general lmaooo) and thank god I finally took the time to read this. In Love The first chapter, wow, I just fell in love with that description. I loved how Grace described Rich, I think it was perfect for his character and it matched him to a tee. I also think you captured the other characters perfectly. Alo and Frankie in the second chapter, their personalities shined and it was great to read.

    There's also something about the dialogue that I really love; especially when Rich and Grace exchange it. It's simple, but it doesn't stray away from the obvious chemistry they both have. Also, Grace is the cutest person in this story. Crazy In Love I mean, she's always adorable but I just really love her in this story. She also seems more relatable as a character in this story, which I love even more.

    Rich, oh lord. Thank goodness he came through like he did in Skins. I like how even in this AU, he's not all over Grace but he slowly warms up to her. I think that is what makes their relationship so good when a reader/viewer watches it blossom. I like how Grace's character develops in the story, and that Rich was that gentle push for her.

    I loved this and I look forward to the day it ever gets updated. You're an amazing writer! :)
    April 2nd, 2019 at 06:14pm
  • Kasi FM

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    OHGAWD GRACE BAE NO.
    I love this so much omfg.
    Bless this story.
    8tracks is my fave thing holy hell
    I love this
    I love you
    omg
    June 16th, 2014 at 04:23am
  • oxford comma

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    EXCUSE ME OH MY GOD SKINS FANFICTION

    OH MY GOD

    I'M FREAKING OUT RIGHT NOW YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW

    I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS AND YOU AND YOUR WRITING AND SKINS

    SO MANY FEELINGS RIGHT NOW I CAN'T EVEN TYPE A SANE COMMENT BUT DUDE I'M IN LOVE OH MY GOD???
    September 21st, 2013 at 01:23am
  • ShanaeNayy

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    Good to know the story isn't dead! Have you heard about the new Skins, they're bringing back Cassie, Effy, and Cook to finish out their story lines, maybe it'll inspire some more updates...=D Can't wait for the next chapter.
    June 30th, 2013 at 02:48am
  • stilinski;

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    grace and rich . <3

    they are my favorite. this is so good. update soon?
    June 7th, 2013 at 04:25pm
  • ShanaeNayy

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    Glad to see your back!
    June 7th, 2013 at 02:06am
  • Robin 'The Sidekick'

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    OUW MAI GA

    I like this. I like it a lot. GOT THAT SUMMERTIME SUMMERTIME SADNESS. SU-SU-SUMMERTIME SUMMER TIME SADNESS. I'm sorry. But I like this. And the boy is cute and the girl is so pretty. :o She's purty!
    December 26th, 2012 at 09:48pm
  • ShanaeNayy

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    Pretty fantastic. It makes me feel like the series never ended. Can't wait for your next update.
    December 15th, 2012 at 02:55am
  • ShanaeNayy

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    I'm glad your back, but I'm greedy for more! Looking forward to the next chapter.
    December 11th, 2012 at 05:33am
  • AHLICE

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    Welcome back my perfect baby <3
    December 11th, 2012 at 02:27am
  • wabadabadaba

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    This is wonderful and I'm so happy this story exists because Grace and Rich were some of my favorite characters from Skins and I definitely miss them. I can't wait for the next update!
    December 11th, 2012 at 02:19am
  • ShanaeNayy

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    I'm so happy to have found this story! Grace and Rich were my favorite couple from Skins, so I love the idea of a different story line between them. Subscribed and excitied for more!
    September 23rd, 2012 at 04:41pm
  • Dystopia

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    This is lovely.
    September 21st, 2012 at 09:15pm
  • puke

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    yeeesss!! my favorite couple on skins i cried so much wah they're perfect & i can't wait to read! teheheh ♡♡
    September 11th, 2012 at 10:59pm