January 27th, 2016 at 09:41pm
Maybe - Comments
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This was really sweet!May 27th, 2014 at 08:56pm
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I just found this, and I really love the simplicity. I love the mystery, the mere possibility of something happening in such small number of words. I just wish this was a prologue to a story, cos I would totally subscribe!February 22nd, 2014 at 02:00pm
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lollipop~!This one was a bit cute, but still seemed to have a tragic taste to it. It was bitter sweet. I love how it was written. It was very poetic, in a way. Again, your work is always so full of emotion, even in such tiny drabbles. This one isn't my favorite, but I did enjoy it.October 27th, 2012 at 12:20am
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Short but very well written. It was very good.October 15th, 2012 at 04:50pm
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Danke
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Short but very poetic. Two thumbs up!!September 24th, 2012 at 07:38am
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Aha! It has been fated for me to read your story!
Which I enjoyed very much. Though short it was very well-written and contained a lot of emotion and feeling. Especially for something that was approximately 250 words. I am extremely impressed.
Very well done,
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I really liked this.September 12th, 2012 at 12:59am
The first part; the introduction is great. The way you went about them with brief sentences. The information that mattered the most was there and the atmosphere was just right.
The second part starts with a strong statement about the relationship between the two of them and the third part seems like the continuation of that statement; they can't f*ck because he's just a kid.
The end is just wishful thinking but it was a good read. Thanks for sharing!
-Maria.