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  • femme fatale.

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    @poetic_asylum
    I'm working on it as we speak.
    March 14th, 2013 at 02:37am
  • poetic_asylum

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    I love this story!! When will you be updating?
    March 13th, 2013 at 06:56am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Shads should keep a better eye on her. *snickers*
    She's pushing him away. I like that she's not willing to fall into the mess, even though she wants to.
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY! asdfghjkl
    October 8th, 2012 at 09:44am
  • justhannah;

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    I love her sense of music. ;) Jax is so cocky, it's amazing. If Shads finds out how he's coming on to her...
    Lovvvvved!
    October 8th, 2012 at 05:36am
  • Haylie Jaed

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    Happy birthday, even if it reaches you a little early. Hopefully it's on time. ;)

    This chapter was better, and it was interesting to see Jax really make a move on her. It's looking more and more like him and Shadows are going to end up having one hell of a fight, and I can't wait to see it!
    October 7th, 2012 at 10:10am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    Lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvved it
    October 7th, 2012 at 07:02am
  • a7xaddictfoREVer

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    whats gonna happen?

    i dont know where all these SOA/A7X stories are coming from but i like it(:
    October 2nd, 2012 at 10:10am
  • justhannah;

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    Oh nooo. This isn't good at all. Either way she's fucked.
    October 2nd, 2012 at 07:44am
  • Haylie Jaed

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    I felt this chapter was a little rushed, to be honest. But that's not to say that it didn't provide a lot of essential information.

    So she has to get close to them, huh? Be on the inside. Conflict of interest much? I'm also eager to see whether or not Shadows finds out what happens. I thought it was pretty stupid, talking about it with Jax at her workplace, where anybody could have heard and jumped to even bigger conclusions. But whatever, it's her funeral. =P

    Lovin' this. ;)
    October 2nd, 2012 at 07:43am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    I knew it was a dream! Tricky, tricky.
    Oh man! That was an intense ending. What the hell...? It is going to hit the fan.
    October 2nd, 2012 at 07:21am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    “I'm choking and tonight, I've had enough.” Beautiful.

    She needed that kiss and what it represents, but not the repercussions it comes with.
    October 2nd, 2012 at 07:15am
  • hachie

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    Awwww Jax and Maura kissed! X3 Now I wonder if things will continue to heat up between the two of them before it explodes! I can definitely see how she is feeling suffocating with Shadows down her neck to make sure that all males know that she is off limits! I can't wait for the next update!
    October 2nd, 2012 at 04:07am
  • Haylie Jaed

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    Oh dear, she kissed him. =| Drunk or not, if Shadows finds out... Well, "death is always around the corner", right?

    Lovely update. ;)
    October 2nd, 2012 at 01:15am
  • justhannah;

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    Oh shit! She's deead, they're both dead. Ugh
    October 2nd, 2012 at 12:58am
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    Oh shit! She's deead, they're both dead. Ugh
    October 2nd, 2012 at 12:58am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    I loved the update
    October 1st, 2012 at 01:51pm
  • Music.DrownLife

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    I love how you make Shadows the monster and Matt a douche. The encounters with Jax make me smile and I laughed at "give Trager my regards." because he's a douche too. =D
    You write SAMCRO well, my dear.
    October 1st, 2012 at 11:07am
  • justhannah;

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    Syn is such a fucking douche to her. Like really, he acts like that as her mother dies?! Ugh he needs to see it from her side, I mean really. I lovve how strong she is. She isn't timid and I think that's really important like she said. But yeah, I love this story. :3 Just saying.
    October 1st, 2012 at 07:49am
  • Haylie Jaed

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    I'm used to Matt being fairly sweet in most fics, so this is a big change. Not a bad one though, just different.

    I feel bad for the poor girl. I especially don't like that Eliza that she works with. Blehh.

    Sorry to hear that you just got out of the hospital. I hope everything is okay!
    October 1st, 2012 at 06:40am
  • hachie

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    I definitely get why Maura can't love Shadows the way he wants her to. I mean he is very possessive of her and his alter ego Shadows seems to have fully enevopled Matt. She can't see Matt anymore but just Shadows. To me it seems that he pressured her into what he wants. Maura hasn't really gotten the time to mourn the death of the only true family ever had despiter her extended one with Avenged. I wouldn't be surprise if she becomes closer to Jax because he has softer side to him that shows more than Shadows. I can't wait for the next update!
    October 1st, 2012 at 06:17am