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  • losing control.

    losing control. (4250)

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    Ahh, I adore your writing style so much. Even though this was short, it was so beautifully written and bah. I don't even know what to say about it.

    Your descriptions are so lovely, I almost felt like I was there with this girl as she was going through this which was kind of an odd feeling, aha.

    He painted my thighs red, viscous and metallic, like some savage artist and I was his helpless exhibit.
    That was such an amazing sentence, gah. It was so..powerful and just amazing.

    I wish I could write more about this but I can't find the right words to describe how amazing it is. Lovely job <3
    September 26th, 2012 at 07:25pm
  • ethereally

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    your writing style is incredible. this may be short, but in these few paragraphs you've managed to capture me completely. i am really looking forward to more.
    September 21st, 2012 at 12:53am
  • feder

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    Why doesn't this have any comment haha. This is very well written and actually beautiful. I love your writing style :)
    September 20th, 2012 at 09:22pm