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  • ruines.

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    This was beautiful. I don't know why it took me so long to finish, but I'm glad I finally did. Noah is so precious. I really love how this was written in his perspective. The last line in chapter 4 truly solidify how in love I am with him. Just the overall sense of him wanting to stay away from things that can harm him because of Sawyer was written so eloquently.

    Sawyer is exciting and carefree I love it. When she asks to keep Noah, I was almost bursting with tears. Cry Well truthfully, I was bursting with tears with every chapter. Especially during the ending. Like so unexpected. How dare you end a story like that!

    Side-note: This reminded me of the Disney movie UP! They're adventurers. It's so cute. Then the Christmas Eve party gave me Perks of Being a Wallflower feels.

    Regardless, this was so innocent and brilliant and I absolutely loved reading every chapter Cute
    May 31st, 2015 at 04:52am
  • The Color Abi

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    I'm sobbing! I never, ever expected that ending! I thought they were gonna fall out of friendship or something but fuck, I didn't expect that!

    Jesus Christ, you really know how to pull on a person's heartstrings!
    April 21st, 2015 at 11:11pm
  • she's fresh to death

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    Annnd I cried. This was a lovely story and I'm sad to see that it's completed aka over but it was beautiful anyway and I'm grateful to have been able to read it. The way you wrote this story was very enthralling. You're very talented and I'm happy I gave this story a shot even though I had a feeling it'd break my heart.
    April 21st, 2015 at 01:29am
  • she's fresh to death

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    This is beautiful.
    April 17th, 2015 at 08:59am
  • vices

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    oh my goodness
    that last line
    that last part just this entire chapter and it's been a long time but clearly you haven't lost your talent bc damn
    March 21st, 2015 at 08:08am
  • INKEDA7X

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    holy shit i love this so much!!!!! :) your writing is so captivating!!!
    February 2nd, 2015 at 08:27am
  • vices

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    "Not being with Sawyer scares me, mom,"
    oh my god
    MICHAEL
    DON'T BE A DICK
    NOAH'S NOT JUST SOME BOY
    SAWYER YOU'RE PERFECT
    NOAH I LOVE YOU
    "Sawyer and Noah have a love story that demands to be written"
    that sounds so John Green-esque oh my gosh loving it
    October 5th, 2013 at 11:32pm
  • swell

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    AW NOAH
    SAWYER
    THEIR LOVE CONSUMES ME
    I LOVE THIS
    AW

    i love noah, i really do
    and sawyer is just so perf for noah i just ugh
    you're fabulous
    and i'm glad this was updates because their love story is <3
    September 30th, 2013 at 05:30am
  • oxford comma

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    JESUS CHRIST CAN THIS BE A NOVEL PLEASE
    September 18th, 2013 at 03:09am
  • coralreefs;

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    This was so sweet. Beautifully written. You're remarkable.
    July 18th, 2013 at 08:55am
  • vices

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    AW HE WAS A CROSSING GUARD FOR HER OMFG
    ASKDFLAKSDHC THIS IS SO CUTE
    oh Noah you most certainly do NOT want to hurt yourself
    at all
    please don't boy c'mon for Sawyer's sake
    and man his parents are like whaaaaaaaa
    July 18th, 2013 at 07:58am
  • swell

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    Christ. CHRIST.
    This is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read on Mibba, ever. EVER.

    There are so many things I love about this story, so I'm just going to list them all. I love that this is written in the male perspective and especially in Noah's, because he's so fragile and innocent in a way, but the way he thinks is so sad and beautiful and I just, I just can't even. Sawyer is a gem and written so beautifully that you can't help but fall in love with her too. I'm in love with their whole relationship, really. I usually can't stand stories written in second person, but the way you write it, it's like something else entirely. Your writing is one of the best I've ever seen on the internet, really, and oh god I can't wait to see what else you've written so I can comment the eff out of it.
    July 12th, 2013 at 12:44pm
  • krystalclear

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    Wow this is probably one of the best stories I have read so far on Mibba.
    I actually feel like I am there with the characters
    Keep up the good work. I really love this story!
    May 26th, 2013 at 10:16pm
  • vices

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    I FIND COMFORT IN THINGS THAT ARE TRUE
    just wow
    that was a brilliant one liner
    perfectly delivered
    you are wonderful omfg

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    AND
    "CAN I KEEP YOU"
    that could sound totally creepy in any other situation
    except for this because god damn this is so cute
    May 26th, 2013 at 08:43pm
  • coralreefs;

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    Wonderful :)
    May 26th, 2013 at 05:46pm
  • coralreefs;

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    Wonderful :)
    May 26th, 2013 at 05:46pm
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    Wonderful :)
    May 26th, 2013 at 05:46pm
  • coralreefs;

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    I'm lost for words. I just.

    You're writing is amazing and I hope you are published someday and that I can buy your books off shelves in stores and read your titles in the "New York Best Sellers".
    May 26th, 2013 at 12:34am
  • blades

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    god damn it I'm so glad you updated this again.

    I started to write I ruin things but deleted it and tried again. I ride my bike a lot. I shook my head against that too.

    you write so beautifully. I'll follow your writing to the ends of the earth, I swear.
    March 13th, 2013 at 05:02am
  • to infinity

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    This is such a wonderful story, I just really really love it.
    March 13th, 2013 at 02:17am