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This was beautiful. I don't know why it took me so long to finish, but I'm glad I finally did. Noah is so precious. I really love how this was written in his perspective. The last line in chapter 4 truly solidify how in love I am with him. Just the overall sense of him wanting to stay away from things that can harm him because of Sawyer was written so eloquently.

Sawyer is exciting and carefree I love it. When she asks to keep Noah, I was almost bursting with tears. Well truthfully, I was bursting with tears with every chapter. Especially during the ending. Like so unexpected. How dare you end a story like that!

Side-note: This reminded me of the Disney movie UP! They're adventurers. It's so cute. Then the Christmas Eve party gave me Perks of Being a Wallflower feels.

Regardless, this was so innocent and brilliant and I absolutely loved reading every chapter

I'm sobbing! I never, ever expected that ending! I thought they were gonna fall out of friendship or something but fuck, I didn't expect that!

Jesus Christ, you really know how to pull on a person's heartstrings!

Annnd I cried. This was a lovely story and I'm sad to see that it's completed aka over but it was beautiful anyway and I'm grateful to have been able to read it. The way you wrote this story was very enthralling. You're very talented and I'm happy I gave this story a shot even though I had a feeling it'd break my heart.

This is beautiful.

oh my goodness
that last line
that last part just this entire chapter and it's been a long time but clearly you haven't lost your talent bc damn

holy shit i love this so much!!!!! :) your writing is so captivating!!!

"Not being with Sawyer scares me, mom,"
oh my god
MICHAEL
DON'T BE A DICK
NOAH'S NOT JUST SOME BOY
SAWYER YOU'RE PERFECT
NOAH I LOVE YOU
"Sawyer and Noah have a love story that demands to be written"
that sounds so John Green-esque oh my gosh loving it

AW NOAH
SAWYER
THEIR LOVE CONSUMES ME
I LOVE THIS
AW

i love noah, i really do
and sawyer is just so perf for noah i just ugh
you're fabulous
and i'm glad this was updates because their love story is <3

JESUS CHRIST CAN THIS BE A NOVEL PLEASE

This was so sweet. Beautifully written. You're remarkable.

AW HE WAS A CROSSING GUARD FOR HER OMFG
ASKDFLAKSDHC THIS IS SO CUTE
oh Noah you most certainly do NOT want to hurt yourself
at all
please don't boy c'mon for Sawyer's sake
and man his parents are like whaaaaaaaa

Christ. CHRIST.
This is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read on Mibba, ever. EVER.

There are so many things I love about this story, so I'm just going to list them all. I love that this is written in the male perspective and especially in Noah's, because he's so fragile and innocent in a way, but the way he thinks is so sad and beautiful and I just, I just can't even. Sawyer is a gem and written so beautifully that you can't help but fall in love with her too. I'm in love with their whole relationship, really. I usually can't stand stories written in second person, but the way you write it, it's like something else entirely. Your writing is one of the best I've ever seen on the internet, really, and oh god I can't wait to see what else you've written so I can comment the eff out of it.

Wow this is probably one of the best stories I have read so far on Mibba.
I actually feel like I am there with the characters
Keep up the good work. I really love this story!

I FIND COMFORT IN THINGS THAT ARE TRUE
just wow
that was a brilliant one liner
perfectly delivered
you are wonderful omfg

AND
AND
"CAN I KEEP YOU"
that could sound totally creepy in any other situation
except for this because god damn this is so cute

Wonderful :)

Wonderful :)

Wonderful :)

I'm lost for words. I just.

You're writing is amazing and I hope you are published someday and that I can buy your books off shelves in stores and read your titles in the "New York Best Sellers".

god damn it I'm so glad you updated this again.

I started to write I ruin things but deleted it and tried again. I ride my bike a lot. I shook my head against that too.

you write so beautifully. I'll follow your writing to the ends of the earth, I swear.

This is such a wonderful story, I just really really love it.