February 14th, 2013 at 09:28pm
Fight the Force - Comments
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They're both really stubborn but I think they're so cute together. I live it, I'm glad they end up together in the end. <3 Lovely.February 14th, 2013 at 07:52pm
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This was...Lovely, to say in the least.November 1st, 2012 at 06:54pm
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aw, how adorable ^.^October 29th, 2012 at 09:05pm
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all i have to say, beautifulOctober 29th, 2012 at 05:52pm
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:D awww!!!! <33October 29th, 2012 at 06:15am
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I loved the updates. They are so perfect for each other...but I like how they are having a breakup. I love when soulmates find each other no matter what. It's so perfect. Update soon:)October 28th, 2012 at 10:28pm
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This is so sad! :(October 26th, 2012 at 11:12pm
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What?! :o :((October 26th, 2012 at 11:02pm
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@ Be Your Everything
Well puppies are adorable! :) haha and thank you much, it really means a lot!October 18th, 2012 at 12:31pm -
Okay, this chapter is so freakin' cute it makes me want to go out and buy a puppy...random I know. But this story's really good. Thanks for writing it, it makes me happy!October 16th, 2012 at 12:01am
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@ karen's evil twin
Hey, so first off - sorry for making you cry! But I guess in a way it's good if my story had that impression?:S
Not sure, but anyways hope you're feeling better now, don't worry I'll be posting again in a minute.
Apologies for grammar and description errors, I have this thing where once I've written, it's done - I'm a lazy person and don't proof read! haha, also the nickname is mentioned again later on, I had wrote it and forgot about it...sorta thing, and for the drinking age, it should be American age but I've got my British nonsense stuck in there, sorry about that! :P Again, sorry about the depression but I'm actually so happy to read your comment, it was nicely constructive criticized and it lovely so thank you! :)October 15th, 2012 at 10:08pm -
STUPID MIBBA WHY YOU POST TWICE.October 10th, 2012 at 02:22am
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This was...cute. I mean, there are other words, but I'm almost crying right now because I'm so emotional. I would be perfectly happy if you just stopped the story right there, and maybe wrote a sequel sometime in the future about their lives and their children. Nevermind. That's the period talking.
So I liked the plot, and the characters were believable. The only thing that kind of irked me was the occasional typo or grammatical error. And sometimes, the description was a little weird. I was left wondering why he chose "beans" as her nickname and why she never used his nickname more than once. Then there's the age thing; I live in America were the drinking age is 21, so I was really confused about the setting and why she was ordering a drink when she was 19--which wasn't very clear either, until later on in the chapters.
And, now that I've done my job as critic, I'm going to go back to crying and listen to sad music and read about murder. You have sufficiently depressed me. But I'm subscribed, so it's all good.October 10th, 2012 at 02:22am -
LovelyOctober 10th, 2012 at 01:48am
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I love this. It's beautiful. Please continue. (:October 7th, 2012 at 01:39am
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Aw Elijah, please don't hurt Lily!October 6th, 2012 at 06:57pm
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aw this is so cute!!!October 5th, 2012 at 10:53pm
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@ perfectxxangelx
Thanks so much!:)
I'll be updating again tomorrow, glad you like it:)October 4th, 2012 at 10:45pm -
LOVE IT!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE ASAP!October 4th, 2012 at 09:34pm
Aw thanks very much! :) Glad you liked it <3