It's Time for Something Real - Comments

I'm so happy! That was amazing. I love the song he had dedicated to her. It's so sweet. You did a great job with this story and the way there was a bunch of suspense. I loved the back and forth of being friends and not speaking to each other. Continue writing, you got something there.

It is about time they settled things and Desi is the best for helping Jacob. Even though he should have begged for that kind of help ;-). Sad to see it end but loved it nonetheless hehe

It's over? I'm sad that it's done, but I'm so happy that they finally endedup together. The scene at the concert with him singing to her totally reminded me of an eighties romance story, but in the best of ways!! Lol. I mentally fist pumped:P. And congratulations on finishing another awesome story! I really really enjoyed it:) and might I add that Jacob looked rather sexy in that pic from the cruise:D

I love the ending to this - it's just so cute and right and I'm so happy that he finally pulled his head out of his ass lol.

I just love the characters in this story and like sup,jessay I'm gonna miss them *sob*.

Love the pic of Jacob :-)

OMFGOSH. what a great way to end a story. this was so unbelievably cute and i loved it so much!! i'm gonna miss this story and some of the characters. they were too great. sighhh. oh, jacob<3

lmao what a why to start off a trip. By sunbathing and then having a flirtatious Dave hanging around. It's good the show went off without a hitch and that she had fun as well. Lmao of course it works between with two girls. I mean it's no fair having a guy fight like that lmao. Lord she thought she didn't have to deal with him at first when he was walking out there. And thank god she told him how it is. Especially that Steven was okay with everything. Maybe he'll redeem himself. Loooved it.

Thank you desi for being awesome! Maybe now Jacob and Roxy can move past this road block. I'm curious to know what Jacob will do now that he knows everything. Should be interesting. And can I just say what a sweetheart Steven is! I just caught up on the last two chapters and telling her to go on the cruise because it's romantic was just.. Sweet. He really does want the world for her:) loved David in this too. What a charmer!

i agree with gothique. it is a bit weird how he just comes out of the woodwork as soon as she's with another guy. i'm glad Desi straightened it up for her, but i still would've gotten in a slap or something. he deserved it.

I love David, and miraculously when she's having fun with other guys Jacob suddenly appears like a ninja lol

I hope that Desi got through that thick skull of his what he's been doing to Roxanne and how his actions are affecting her. Ooh, I'm all curious about what he's going to do now.

Oh my. Steven isn't as oblivious as everyone thinks he is lmao. He's picking up on things. Woooh costume shopping lol. It's always a rule for the girls to dress like sluts ;-). That is one hell of a surprise. Lmao of course she had to drag them along. Loooved it.

I wish she would've told the truth to Steven so that way he wouldn't be trying to get them together but what can you do? I" excited to see what happens on the Cruise. :3

A free cruise sounds awesome, just without the unwelcome passenger but they can always throw him overboard at some point :p

I'm glad that she's going to drag Desi and Phoenix with her. ya never know, there may be a hottie on board that takes a shine to Roxanne that will make Jacob as jealous as all hell :-)

i loveddd itttt :D i'm glad she's dragging desi and phoenix with her. that would be SO much freaking fun! and it's kinda sad she had to lie to steven again, but...i'm not sure how he'd act if he knew the whole truth. i mean.. he couldn't get TOO pissed, could he?

Ok, so maybe I'm waaay off base, but I'm guessing that song really isn't about her and that whole bit with her being on stage, stripper dancing, telling him the feelings mutual AND telling him he's a prick is just an awkward misunderstanding? I can totally see where she is coming from though. Jacob is very confusing. Like hot and cold. Besides all of that I loved her talk with Steven. He loves her a lot and it was just very heartwarming. As always, I can't wait for more:)

Awe that must have been such a hard talk to get through. Especially when Steven said I'm not your father. He might as well be at this point. He's taken care of her like she was his own since she was 16. Oh dear. The songs. the show. So much drama. Maybe she was wrong. And he was just trying to figure things out. Or maybe she was right. Those two need to talk. Without fighting lol. Loooved it.

WHOAAAA BUDDY. jesus, if Steven was disappointed about her little dancing before, i wonder how he'll feel now. and JESUS dancing on Jacob like that. ohhh torture. updaaate

Oh man it's gonna be interesting to see what Steven has to say to Jacob after the performance. Yeah, if I was Roxy I'd be thinking the lyrics were aimed at me too.

I wonder if Steven has put two and two together now after seeing that

Well my goodness. Atleast they could hang out civilly even if it was to cover the story she had. But it seems they both enjoyed it. It's good to see them get along lol. Loooved it

That's cute. How they just sang for each other and dyed her hair. It's awesome. But there's always a calm before the storm so of course things have to explode. It'll be awesome. I can't wait to see what happens between them. :D

Omg yes! I absolutely loved this! I'm glad that they just hung out like normal friends! And the singing and the hair dying.... Totally awesome! Everyone needs a Jacob to help them color their hair!!! I'm looking forward to this steamy stuff you speak of. Lol!