Doing What He Does Best, Leaving. Again. - Comments

@ dr. faustus
Thank you so much for your comment. I am really glad you have liked what you have read. I am glad you think he is an asshole I had so much trouble writing him that way for I dont want him to be an asshole at all. But for the story he must be. I really appreciate it :) I will be updating this story within the week.

So, I 'm not too familiar with this fandom, but so far I liked what I read. This is the first time I read a NHL on Mibba and I think that's pretty cool! The first and second chapter were good. I liked the narration and voice Danielle had throughout. Being a wife of an athlete is serious and a lot of work it seems like and just I can tell she's trying her best to be supportive, but at times it doesn't work. The liked that the first chapter was all storytelling and background info about these characters and their lives. Her ex husband, soon to be husband or whatever he is, I don't care for him too much, he seems like a asshole. But so far, this is interesting and keep going! ;-)

Thanks Kaca65. I went home for the long weekend so hopefully I can get a chapter out by monday :)

Update soon please :)