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  • kianstam

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    I consider myself a fairly decent reader and actually wrote fan fiction more years ago than I care to remember. I cannot tell you how much I truly enjoyed what you wrote. Obviously you must realize how good you are with the written word but you cannot possibly just HOW good you are or you'd have never made the apologies and explanations you make at the end of this writing. But then I think that's what makes you who you are as a writer. I have read one other fic of yours that Noelle stars in with Tommy and actually came to this one after that. I'm not sure if you've written more but I truly and selfishly hope so. You GET Tom Hardy the Warrior, no doubt of that. It's like you live inside his head, and I know you live, at least part of you, in Noelle. Well done, author! Well done!
    May 19th, 2013 at 08:46pm
  • clo_87

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    This is so good! Seriously, so amazing. I just read it, then read it over again, and now i might read it once more because i cant get enough of it!!
    Thank you so so much :) x
    April 4th, 2013 at 11:12am
  • sugapiehoney

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    This is really good .. please continue! :)
    December 31st, 2012 at 11:27pm
  • QueenSuperficial

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    Love it! Absolutely awesome. :)
    December 11th, 2012 at 03:34pm
  • calliopegirl

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    AWESOME!!
    November 16th, 2012 at 04:13am
  • M Shadows's Girl

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    All I can say is your are freaking genius!!!!!!
    October 26th, 2012 at 10:38am
  • Shadowsgirl

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    I loved it!!
    September 28th, 2012 at 11:33pm
  • Lloyd Christmas

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    @ flitterbloom.
    Yesss!!!!!
    September 26th, 2012 at 11:55pm
  • Apology

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    Ahhh Oh God u don't know how happy this story has made me - because even for a one shot it's still something Tommy from Warrior- there's not that many of those fanfics on here and I'm so happy!! (I'm jumping up and down)
    September 26th, 2012 at 11:15pm
  • eraserhead.

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    @ Lloyd Christmas
    Thank you!
    I'm actually in the process of turning it into a mini series, but shhh. c;
    September 26th, 2012 at 07:49pm
  • Lloyd Christmas

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    This is fucking awesome. I wish there was more. Or perhaps a full story :)
    September 26th, 2012 at 04:21pm
  • eraserhead.

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    @ walksonair2002
    THANK YOU!
    September 26th, 2012 at 06:13am
  • eraserhead.

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    @ Smiling Scarlet
    Oh, thanks so much. I've had years and years of practice, so I'm glad it's all paying off. c;
    September 26th, 2012 at 06:13am
  • Alsoldey

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    I love this! I love the words and I love all the images that went through my mind. You are a talented writer, darling! Keep it up ;]
    September 26th, 2012 at 05:44am
  • walksonair2002

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    loved this!!
    September 26th, 2012 at 04:26am
  • poorsadpoofy

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    Oh, you should definitely continue with this writing style, HOLY SHIT. But uh, yeah. WOW.
    And so him, right? I could literally picture all this happening in my head, like a movie.
    September 26th, 2012 at 02:52am
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    I haven't even read this yet, and I DIDNT KNOW ABOUT IT, WHAT IS THAT MESS ABOUT?!? But oh gosh, I'm running to read this now. Like... NOW.
    Be waiting for another comment, fersure.
    September 26th, 2012 at 02:38am
  • GlasgowXsmile

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    I love how you wrote in character, it was really great, I loved the grittiness and both of their needs are almost the same in a way. Both of them are two messy but in very different ways and I liked that. When she found out that he didn't come into eat and she felt a bit of pain-- I felt for Noelle but then all was right in their own little way when he walked her home.

    Loved it!
    September 25th, 2012 at 12:06pm