Might Break - Comments

I consider myself a fairly decent reader and actually wrote fan fiction more years ago than I care to remember. I cannot tell you how much I truly enjoyed what you wrote. Obviously you must realize how good you are with the written word but you cannot possibly just HOW good you are or you'd have never made the apologies and explanations you make at the end of this writing. But then I think that's what makes you who you are as a writer. I have read one other fic of yours that Noelle stars in with Tommy and actually came to this one after that. I'm not sure if you've written more but I truly and selfishly hope so. You GET Tom Hardy the Warrior, no doubt of that. It's like you live inside his head, and I know you live, at least part of you, in Noelle. Well done, author! Well done!

This is so good! Seriously, so amazing. I just read it, then read it over again, and now i might read it once more because i cant get enough of it!!
Thank you so so much :) x

This is really good .. please continue! :)

Love it! Absolutely awesome. :)

AWESOME!!

All I can say is your are freaking genius!!!!!!

I loved it!!

@ flitterbloom.
Yesss!!!!!

Ahhh Oh God u don't know how happy this story has made me - because even for a one shot it's still something Tommy from Warrior- there's not that many of those fanfics on here and I'm so happy!! (I'm jumping up and down)

@ Lloyd Christmas
Thank you!
I'm actually in the process of turning it into a mini series, but shhh. c;

This is fucking awesome. I wish there was more. Or perhaps a full story :)

@ walksonair2002
THANK YOU!

@ Smiling Scarlet
Oh, thanks so much. I've had years and years of practice, so I'm glad it's all paying off. c;

I love this! I love the words and I love all the images that went through my mind. You are a talented writer, darling! Keep it up ;]

loved this!!

Oh, you should definitely continue with this writing style, HOLY SHIT. But uh, yeah. WOW.
And so him, right? I could literally picture all this happening in my head, like a movie.

I haven't even read this yet, and I DIDNT KNOW ABOUT IT, WHAT IS THAT MESS ABOUT?!? But oh gosh, I'm running to read this now. Like... NOW.
Be waiting for another comment, fersure.

I love how you wrote in character, it was really great, I loved the grittiness and both of their needs are almost the same in a way. Both of them are two messy but in very different ways and I liked that. When she found out that he didn't come into eat and she felt a bit of pain-- I felt for Noelle but then all was right in their own little way when he walked her home.

Loved it!