Safe and Sound - Comments

It just too adorable of how Louis is c:

You crazy person, I don't know why you don't love this chapter. Louis is jus perfect and I think it really shows his character and how caring he is in this. He barely knows this girl yet he's more than willing to be there for her. This was fabulous, update soon!

1. brilliant chapter! Louis is so adorable.
2. I feel so bad for Dahlia; hopefully he can help her see that what happened to her wasnt her fault.
3. YESSS!!! IT IS AMAZING!!!! I'VE LISTENED TO IT LIKE A MILLION TIMES!!! what are your fave songs? :D

cant wait for more :D

aw this was adorable. :( AND YES I'VE LISTENED TO TAKE ME HOME. :) AMAZING!

brilliant update!!!!
poor Dahlia!
hopefully she'll be able to confide in Lou when she feels alone. cannot wait for more!!! :D

wow, this story's really sad.... I mean, the chapters 1 to 5 are, sad. But it's the kind of story that I love anyway, y'know, something tragic happen and 1D are there to play heroes, I love it. ^^ Can't wait for the 6th chapter. :) xx

...Oh, dear. Her life is not going so well. Hahaha. But I'm glad that the boys found her. Even if it was kind of late. Hahaha.

Awesome development so far! I can't wait to read more. :D

this is sweet. :)

great update :D absolutely love this so far!! cant wait to see how you incorporate the boys into Dahlia's life as the story progresses :D and I'm pretty sure in reality, El is a sweetheart :D but its a story so you can make her out to be whatever you want :D more soon please?

Aww louis! This makes me sad for her :(

i'm addicted to this.

i'm addicted to this.

i'm addicted to this.

i'm addicted to this.

i'm addicted to this.

You did an amazing job of making me feel like I was there.Really great writing!I really hope Dahilia opens up to Amira and that she doesn't stay numb.I know that is one way to cope but it's not good.I almost cried when reading how pathetic she thought she sounded.That was sweet how Louis jumped at the chance to walk her.I know that he wants her safe but any of the guys could of done it.
Can't wait for more!:)
P.S-I vote at one point the rapist gets the living shit beat out of him.

I really feel bad for her :<

Louis and Dahlia are gonna bang soon, I can feel it. The attacker's gonna come back, Lou will go all ape shit on him, Dahlia will be so grateful she'll ride da D all night long.
Hahah, am I right? Probably not, but that's how it just played out in my head.
This is excellent my dear.

wow. that made me feel so connected to the character, great writing!

p.s i would kill that mother f*cking prick that raped her!!!!

:) great updates :)

Wow.This is really good.I love it already and can't wait for more.I'm intrested to see how the boys come into the story.
Update soon please?:)