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  • feedmetothewolves;

    feedmetothewolves; (100)

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    That was so mean, I can't believe Breckan would do such a thing. After everything they've been through together. At least there are good friends like Peter. I just love this so far, honestly.
    February 17th, 2013 at 01:20am
  • discoveringclouds

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    So only business men and mothers with babies were at the airport? Hmm?? Lol... I like specific writing its interesting like this. So why wasn't anyone else there? No teens? No fathers? No business women?? Hahaha

    The description of the uncle is funny. I can't imagine how noble he is though.. When he doesn't wash his clothes.... Lol.

    Hmm I find it problematic that your character thinks its essential that young people fall in love. Clearly it didn't work out for them. If a man wants to touch a woman he should marry her. Full responsibility. Less broken homes and single mothers. Of course everyone has crushes but doesn't mean they should give themselves away just like that... If it was really love it wouldn't be so fleeting. If it was love they would stay together.

    Also the boy at the end... Why does she need a boy? Why doesn't she have any family first?

    Man... If only she got married. Btw what does she believe in? Any religion? Any beliefs? What's driving her? Keeping her optimistic?
    February 17th, 2013 at 12:54am
  • feedmetothewolves;

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    I feel like I'm going to fall in love with this story.
    February 16th, 2013 at 01:17am