Gonna Be a Damn Rough Night - Comments

This was perfect oh my god

Ahahahaha, that was too funny! .....But at first I really thought Zack was some freaky serial killer O_O

This was a great one shot I was like O.O Zack then I died laughing at the end.

First of all, I would like to say thank you so much for entering my very first contest, it means a lot!

Secondly, the layout that you have used is spot on and the writing is easy to see. I didn't spot any major grammar / spelling mistakes either, so good job there :D

To the actual one shot! I am seriously impressed with it!

I think that it's amazing how you made Alex out to be scared of the little things (and I can totally relate to the being scared of The Wizard Of Oz - it's a scary film, okay?!).

I LOVE how you set it in a haunted corn maze, I've not read any fics that use that setting so congratulations for being original! The banter between Alex and Jack is incredible, your structure was spot on and you certainly know how to make a reader grab hold to the edge of their seat!

When Zack appeared and Alex was lying on the floor, I was seriously sat here like 'he didn't, please tell me that Zack didn't turn all Psycho on him!' and I'm glad that he didn't :D (the world does need some Merrikat from time to time though ;D)

An absolutely fascinating read. Well done!

omfg. this was amazing *frails and dies* when zack come out I was dying; all my feels. but it just ends up being a joke it was awesome. and the pissing pants bit was the best. gosh. *turns into unicorn and crushes into sun*