Melody's Melodies - Comments

  • OkayChris05

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    The character you have built of Melody is fantastic. Getting into this story was not hard to do. Devin is the sweetest thing I can't wait to read if she gets her IPod back
    October 31st, 2012 at 05:03am
  • LainaBoBainaXO

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    Love this story update more please
    October 31st, 2012 at 03:17am
  • OkayChris05

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    I love this story so much update more.
    October 28th, 2012 at 09:09pm
  • maniii111

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    ohh this chapter made me cry. I'm on the verge of tears right now! This story is amazing, I'm excited for the new chapter :) I LOVE Devin!
    October 28th, 2012 at 05:47pm
  • Anon E. Mous

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    Verrrrry good :) I really like it. Update soon
    October 28th, 2012 at 04:26pm
  • abbeyofnowhere

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    Love the song choices. Never heard of a lot of them, but you make me wish I did. Keep up the great work. :)
    October 28th, 2012 at 05:04am
  • MissCathyHeathcliffe

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    this is really good!! can't wait for the next chapter!! Mr. Green
    October 27th, 2012 at 09:14pm
  • maniii111

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    AH THIS SO GOOD! I LOVE Devin! Ohhh this is probably one of my favourite stories on Mibba! I really hope you update soon. This story is amazing!
    October 27th, 2012 at 08:00pm
  • OkayChris05

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    Can't wait to read how this wonderful story plays out. Update soon.
    October 25th, 2012 at 06:29am
  • xLxOxVxEx

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    That dick... lol Good update! Though sad, but still good. He better make a magical reappearance and have a pretty freaking good excuse -_-" lol :)
    October 23rd, 2012 at 04:40am
  • a-c-i-d

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    Oh my goodness. I love this story so much. AND DEVIN. Ugh. I love him.
    October 21st, 2012 at 05:11am
  • losing control.

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    This is interesting so far! I feel so bad for Melody, as if it's her fault for whatever her dad is angry about. I like your use of descriptions, it isn't overpowering but you add enough to get a fairly clear picture in my head which was awesome.

    I love the title of this too, very clever. I also like that you use a different song for every chapter, it sets the mood for the chapter which is a really interesting thing to do!

    Anyways, I like this so far and can't wait to see what you do with it! (:
    October 1st, 2012 at 05:56am
  • Hazelmack_

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    Getting interesting... Mr. Green
    And I really love the idea of using songs for every chapter. It really brings out the tone of the story ^.^
    October 1st, 2012 at 01:56am