The character you have built of Melody is fantastic. Getting into this story was not hard to do. Devin is the sweetest thing I can't wait to read if she gets her IPod back
This is interesting so far! I feel so bad for Melody, as if it's her fault for whatever her dad is angry about. I like your use of descriptions, it isn't overpowering but you add enough to get a fairly clear picture in my head which was awesome.
I love the title of this too, very clever. I also like that you use a different song for every chapter, it sets the mood for the chapter which is a really interesting thing to do!
Anyways, I like this so far and can't wait to see what you do with it! (: