Not the Sweetest Chocolate - Comments

Ok my.kindle.freak out so I'm sorry for so many comments!!!!!

Ok so on So I have never nor will I ever watch Buffy so I'm kinda lost in this.whole.story sorry!!!!and also im not a huge fan of fanfics or sex in stories either...comment swap really got me on this one...ugh..
Ok a few good things I really like your layout it is very neat and easy to read so thank you( sometimes people have horrific layout that makes me want to scream)...also you decribe things very well I.can almost see only mind what is going on...
You are very good and talented it's just not the story for.me.haha..but keep writing!!!!

Ok so on So I have never nor will I ever watch Buffy so I'm kinda lost in this.whole.story sorry!!!!and also im not a huge fan of fanfics or sex in stories either...comment swap really got me on this one...ugh..
Ok a few good things I really like your layout it is very neat and easy to read so thank you( sometimes people have horrific layout that makes me want to scream)...also you decribe things very well I.can almost see only mind what is going on...
You are very good and talented it's just not the story for.me.haha..but keep writing!!!!

Ok so on So I have never nor will I ever watch Buffy so I'm kinda lost in this.whole.story sorry!!!!and also im not a huge fan of fanfics or sex in stories either...comment swap really got me on this one...ugh..
Ok a few good things I really like your layout it is very neat and easy to read so thank you( sometimes people have horrific layout that makes me want to scream)...also you decribe things very well I.can almost see only mind what is going on...
You are very good and talented it's just not the story for.me.haha..but keep writing!!!!

Ok so on So I have never nor will I ever watch Buffy so I'm kinda lost in this.whole.story sorry!!!!and also im not a huge fan of fanfics or sex in stories either...comment swap really got me on this one...ugh..
Ok a few good things I really like your layout it is very neat and easy to read so thank you( sometimes people have horrific layout that makes me want to scream)...also you decribe things very well I.can almost see only mind what is going on...
You are very good and talented it's just not the story for.me.haha..but keep writing!!!!

Ok so on So I have never nor will I ever watch Buffy so I'm kinda lost in this.whole.story sorry!!!!and also im not a huge fan of fanfics or sex in stories either...comment swap really got me on this one...ugh..
Ok a few good things I really like your layout it is very neat and easy to read so thank you( sometimes people have horrific layout that makes me want to scream)...also you decribe things very well I.can almost see only mind what is going on...
You are very good and talented it's just not the story for.me.haha..but keep writing!!!!

Ok so on So I have never nor will I ever watch Buffy so I'm kinda lost in this.whole.story sorry!!!!and also im not a huge fan of fanfics or sex in stories either...comment swap really got me on this one...ugh..
Ok a few good things I really like your layout it is very neat and easy to read so thank you( sometimes people have horrific layout that makes me want to scream)...also you decribe things very well I.can almost see only mind what is going on...
You are very good and talented it's just not the story for.me.haha..but keep writing!!!!

Ok so on So I have never nor will I ever watch Buffy so I'm kinda lost in this.whole.story sorry!!!!and also im not a huge fan of fanfics or sex in stories either...comment swap really got me on this one...ugh..
Ok a few good things I really like your layout it is very neat and easy to read so thank you( sometimes people have horrific layout that makes me want to scream)...also you decribe things very well I.can almost see only mind what is going on...
You are very good and talented it's just not the story for.me.haha..but keep writing!!!!

I have no idea why comment swap sent me here, because I have no clue about anything Buffy related (and I don't usually read fanfiction).

I must say your layout is very neat, though! And you have a lovely way with making the dialogue seem real. I have a problem with that.

I don't really like the spacing of the words, but I guess that's really your own call!