Behind Closed Doors - Comments

Dear authors,

The first chapters were very confusing and it was hard to keep up with the characters but the plot line was superb. I loved the complicated emotions and the way you made the story interesting. I just wanted to read more and more.

I'll check out more of your work for sure but work out your grammar/spelling mistakes cause they take away from the story and you could add more descriptions between dialogues. That's the only advice I can give about this story, if you guys ever decide to edit it.

I almost forgot, brownie points for the way you guys displayed the complexity behind relationships. :)

~Marian.

Love the ending it was happy :)

Love it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Glad tht the boys called truce and Onyx u sneaky son of a biscuit breaking rules tht u set up, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

boys can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

It's time to come clean let the screaming match begin, hate to sound happy but I have been waiting for them to tell each other the truth, anyhoo great chapter can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

i love it bt most of all i love the sex part its more inserting

I agree with Aca it's time to tell Onyx but don't be like me and Sapphiremessed around behind ur back, u got to be gentle with tht kind of news so good luck, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Yey. Happiness :)

Love it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, so Aca wasn't tryin to hurt Sapphire hmmm I still say kill him for scaring her but thts just me, but yay Syzmon and Sapphire r dating yay, anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

i am going to kill u nisha.....i think aca and her need to have a freaKIN BOXING MATCH AFTER THAST SHIT.......wtf

What the hell Aca seriously don't be a douche...oh wait u already r Sapphire doesn't belong to u and u should be worrying about not hurting Onyx feelings by sleeping with her best friend, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I personally think your horny ass ain't gota read it. No more. Its a story not porn

uhm... I personally think the story got a little boring...

Jeez really a cliffhanger update like now I want to kno what's goin to happen next, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

What the hell Sapphire, u should have just told him tht u slept with Aca but u still will be his girlfriend not the opposite gosh I just want to punch u in the face, cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Thn u should have said no Aca if it didnt feel right being in her with Saphire, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Very good, god Sapphire is so confused with Syzmon and so am I, love this story can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

very very good.