Oh damn...MICHAEL CHRISTOPHER FUENTES! HOW DARE YOU! I can't believe he slapped her. He slapped his own fucking sister! Wow. Well, this story is absolutely amazing! I can't wait until the next update!
Omg, how did that even happen? Well, Tony & Lily are obviously gonna get it on. He better not play her, or Mike will kill him! Fantastic update! I can't wait until the next one!
Vic is such an awesome older brother. I mean, I understand where Mike is coming from, but just let her take the chance! I really loved it, despite how short it is. I can't wait until the next update!
Well that was a lovely update :) Tony totally likes Lily & I'm thinking that she's attracted to him & wants to be more than friends ;D I can't wait until the next update!
I really like this story. It's very well-written & it's cool that you have Mike be the over protective brother & Vic be the total chill brother :) I can't wait until the next update