Girl All the Bad Guys Want - Comments

That update about MCR that you wrote was amazing an I hope everyone remembers that instead of throwing It out the window. You have an amazing story and I am so glad we are in the mcrmy together. It sounds like such a fairy tale that you got engaged at a my chem concert and it really is amazing . I never got to see them live as I am only a recent fan but I will continue to listen to them and I am glad I got the chance to be part of this amazing experience <3

That update about MCR that you wrote was amazing an I hope everyone remembers that instead of throwing It out the window. You have an amazing story and I am so glad we are in the mcrmy together. It sounds like such a fairy tale that you got engaged at a my chem concert and it really is amazing . I never got to see them live as I am only a recent fan but I will continue to listen to them and I am glad I got the chance to be part of this amazig experience <3

No offense, but Nona is a little two dimensional in character developmental. She's borderline, if not already, Mary-Sue. I would work on her quite a bit.

update soon please! I can't wait to see what will happen. It's kinda hard to get an idea because the chapters are kinda short (no offence, I understand. I do the same thing every now and then) I like it so far :)

please update more!