First of all, I'd like to say that I'm glad this story is being updated again :) and I am very sorry for your loss.
I really, really like this story. It's unique. There is something about this story that makes me hang for the next installment and that doesn't happen very regularly.
I like that Zack has issues. That he's insecure, he's angry - I meant hey, he was fucked over by those he was closest to. I'm just glad that Scarlett has been able to help him with that. She's showing him that he's worth something, that he isn't washed out and a wasted talent like he thought and like he was treated by his Ex and family - who I hate, by the way!
He's trying for her. As corny as it may sound, she is like his talisman. She is going to keep him grounded because he finally feels like he has something to live for. All he has to do now is focus on them as a couple and control his damn anger. It's not just sexual frustrations... which they are starting to release... maybe he needs to take up boxing to release the excess or do something serene, like fishing hahaha
And he's doing the same for her. She's finally biting the bullet and going back to baseball. She's conquering her fears and doing what she loves, what she's good at! And of course, there's the added bonus of her boyfriend being the coach and who wouldn't like that extra time with their man?
I know that it makes it more exciting and whatnot, but damn... I hope his office is soundproof or they are playing with fire. I hope they don't get caught!
Anyway, enough from me, until next time :)
I can't wait to see how this all unfolds! Anticipating your next update... and the one after that! :)
Sweet baby Jesus that was hot!!!! OMG I love chapters like these, and I can't wait for Friday (in the story of course) to come. OMG UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN :3
Oh, explicit scenes, who doesn't love them?!! I can't wait!!! :3 oh, and I'm so glad Zacky and Scarlett had sorted things out!!! Geez, that had me so nervous. Loved it!!! :D
Oh I do like explicit scenes and this one was like a teaser to how they are going to be?? Oh my gosh I can't wait to read more of this story and it's one of my favorite pairings also!!
I love this story! Especially the fact it is placed in Tennessee since that is where I'm from, and the way you describe the town sounds just like where I grew up haha. You're a fantastic writer and I love this story so much! Please update soon!!!!
I can’t simply say that I like this story, because that doesn’t do it justice. It’s fresh, it’s well written, it’s easily read, and it’s entertaining, among other things. I stumbled upon this story, and I’m glad I did! And I will repeat what everyone else has said so far, please keep updating! :)
I'm so glad this has been updated. I loved this chapter! I found this story like a couple of weeks ago. I love the whole concept of it. I do have one question though... Are the rest of the guys going to be in it? Or just Zacky? Just something I was curious about.