The Only Moment We Were Alone - Comments

  • hockeylove719

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    Ok, I finally remembered!! Haha. But really, this was awesome! I love how it started and ended with things he knew and things he still needed to learn. I want to know more about their relationship, or old relationship. I also liked that Erinn moved on and didn't wait around for her next chance with Jon because that's the theme that everyone (including me) seems to pick lol. Yes, it was sad and I feel for Jonny Boy, but the closure at the end with the rain boots was amazingly simple and real.
    Great job!! :)
    July 12th, 2013 at 01:39am
  • hawkeygurl8819

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    Omg crying.
    January 27th, 2013 at 07:29am
  • gitadeon

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    Wow. That was intense! Loved the story. I got a little confused at one part, but I think you wrote this story perfectly. I'm glad it wasn't a happy ending, too many of those and you get sick of them! Congrats on such a great story!
    October 17th, 2012 at 03:25am
  • saudade.

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    Wow. That as something. I was so impressed with how this was written, all the way through. And then I looked at the author. I shouldn't have been surprised. You've got such a talent for writing and it shows in this just as much as it shows in your other stories. Really well done.
    October 14th, 2012 at 04:24pm
  • fangirl1999

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    Very sad:( But good! Makes me curious to know more about what happened between them.
    October 14th, 2012 at 06:56am