Ok, I finally remembered!! Haha. But really, this was awesome! I love how it started and ended with things he knew and things he still needed to learn. I want to know more about their relationship, or old relationship. I also liked that Erinn moved on and didn't wait around for her next chance with Jon because that's the theme that everyone (including me) seems to pick lol. Yes, it was sad and I feel for Jonny Boy, but the closure at the end with the rain boots was amazingly simple and real. Great job!! :)
Wow. That was intense! Loved the story. I got a little confused at one part, but I think you wrote this story perfectly. I'm glad it wasn't a happy ending, too many of those and you get sick of them! Congrats on such a great story!
Wow. That as something. I was so impressed with how this was written, all the way through. And then I looked at the author. I shouldn't have been surprised. You've got such a talent for writing and it shows in this just as much as it shows in your other stories. Really well done.
Great job!! :)