Better Together - Comments

great story, sad it's over :(

Alright so first off; I no absolutely nothing about hockey, so it actually is quiet difficult to read this, but with that being said I actually liked it a lot. I like detailed stories and this one really isn't detailed but that doesn't mean that I didn't like it, because I really did. But one thing that annoyed me was that she Dani got pregnant after they had sex once or twice, and both of them being virgins the first time. Oh and the fact that you jumped three months in the story, but it doesn't really matter though, I just wanted to let you know.

Anyway, I really like it, so I'm glad that I read it :)

really good, you should continue!

It's not really my cup of tea, let me say that right away. It's a good story, which is why I've recc'd and subscribed, but I don't like the idea of writing fanfictions based on real people. I will say, though, that I absolutely adored it when I ignored that Jake was Sidney Crosby's son and pretended that it was a totally original story. Dani and Jake have a great chemistry that I look forward to reading more of.