Oh my god this was awesome x) The whole way through I was like, "Oh, I know what's happening, I know what's happening" but the story took an entirely different turn than what I thought it was going to, and I love that. My goodness, Loki is ridiculous.
I really like the style that this was written in! It was like it had the third person point of view, but with the intimacy of first person. I really like what you did with the prompt, and the story was overall exciting! Tony really stayed true to his character, especially in the bedroom scene with Steve! When he said, "Surprised to see you're still here, most girls take off and leave," I almost died! It was so perfect!!
Ahhh thats good. I'm no fan of Frostiron, but still funny. Now where's my Wincest *raises eyebrows* or if you can't do that, at least some Thunderfrost to clean my mind! Excuse my slash needs...