Guardian Angel - Comments

  • butterfly lovers.

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    It's a shame this story is on hold because this is a fic that I would definitely look forward to seeing an update. The plot is very interesting. I don't come across too many guardian angel fics, but I feel that this works so well. I think you captured every character perfectly. They were so well written, which is just a small thing that means a lot to me since The Outsiders is one of my favorite books. I liked that Vennie didn't feel far off from the gang if that makes sense. Like, the rest of the gang, with their personalities, just work so well together. I think my one concern was for Vennie to be the odd one out, but it didn't feel like that. So good job on that! I would have loved a bit more narration, because there is a lot of dialogue but it didn't take away the amazingness of the story lol. Well done!!
    April 4th, 2019 at 11:29pm
  • jayjay_123

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    this is great!! :)
    March 14th, 2013 at 05:43am
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    Looking good girly! I'm dying for more!
    December 15th, 2012 at 05:22pm
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    This is looking supper interesting and I'm getting really excited to see whats going to happen. I love how you really captured the character I'm totally hooked now :)
    December 2nd, 2012 at 06:31pm