It's a shame this story is on hold because this is a fic that I would definitely look forward to seeing an update. The plot is very interesting. I don't come across too many guardian angel fics, but I feel that this works so well. I think you captured every character perfectly. They were so well written, which is just a small thing that means a lot to me since The Outsiders is one of my favorite books. I liked that Vennie didn't feel far off from the gang if that makes sense. Like, the rest of the gang, with their personalities, just work so well together. I think my one concern was for Vennie to be the odd one out, but it didn't feel like that. So good job on that! I would have loved a bit more narration, because there is a lot of dialogue but it didn't take away the amazingness of the story lol. Well done!!
April 4th, 2019 at 11:29pm
