Anthems for a Seventeen-Year-Old Girl - Comments

First things, first, this story is extremely well written, no not even extremely it's just..It's like you're painting a story and its amazing. Just the way you're writing it is awesome. I like the ending of the first chapter, it's really I don't know it's like the beginning and the middle of the chapter is so elegant and then the end gives it a carefree feel.

"Ever time a kid...blame...home life." This sentence. So freaking true. I really feel like I can relate to this girl! I used to be so much like her in high school. :) I like how you added in a bit about her relationship with her mother and how others view them. And then you came back to the present without a sudden leap or a rocky return.

Okay usually, I hate names that aren't really names, but I love her name. 'Holiday' that is so fitting.
This story is great, you should keep going!
I love light and fuzzy stories that don't have underlying plots. Just a unique high school story with a little love and a lot of elegance. :)

I love this. There's no other way to say it.
I. LOVE. THIS.
I'm subscribing and recommending for sure. :)
It was wonderful. I love how you started off by saying how insignificant we are, it's one of my favorite topics. Lol and I melted when she fell head over heels when the guy commented on what she was reading. My favorite line out of both chapters? The last sentence in the first paragraph of the second chapter: "You no longer are."
Don't know why, but it just stayed with me. :)
Great, great job on this!!

It was great. Everything just flows and reads well. Definitely one worth keeping track of.

Looks good! I enjoy your writing style and anticipate the next update :)