Mr.Clock and the Strings - Comments

Wow. I was completely caught off guard with that one, but it's a very gripping piece. I would also like to see if you could make it to something more, but it is perfect as is. It made me sad at how is shows Clarabelle(I'm sorry if that's wrong) spent her life. It's sad as she wanted so much more.

Anyone who uses a clock as symbolism immediately has my attention... But this was very amazing.

The idea of wanting to grow up too quickly is an interesting one. Nobody seems to realize what they're missing until it's too late.

This is very well-written and has great potential to evolve into something bigger. I suggest that you expand it into something even more fantastic.

xo