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  • Haylie Jaed

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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

    I don't know what to squeal over more here - baby Mason or the closing lines. ^_^ This was just... It was perfect. I love, love, loved this story!

    I just... Ugh. I can't believe this is over.

    May they live happily ever after!
    March 14th, 2014 at 01:18am
  • Haylie Jaed

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    I'm going to comment on both chapters separately, because you deserve le comments.

    Yay, they're getting married! =D I loved Zack asking the girls to run for the cake if she said no. XD It was such a laugh out loud moment for me and I loved it!

    This is a short one, 'cause I need to read the epilogue now. ;)
    March 14th, 2014 at 01:13am
  • fiction246

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    Aww yay :) beautiful ending!!!! And they had another baby!!! <3
    March 13th, 2014 at 10:55pm
  • fiction246

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    I'm glad that she has gotten closure with Chance. I'm also happy that Zacky was understanding :) looking forward to more!!!
    March 13th, 2014 at 01:29am
  • Haylie Jaed

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    Kinda bummed that we didn't get to see a continuation of the previous chapter, but you're right - Chance deserved a better send off. I love that you did that. I don't think maybe people would have. =) And thank you for not having Zacky jump to conclusions when he saw them! Perfect. ^_^

    So close to the end. D= I don't want it to end!
    March 12th, 2014 at 11:32pm
  • Haylie Jaed

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    This... I loved this chapter. It never even occurred to me that people still hadn't discovered the twins, and now it's out there. And I love, love, love that all the guys instantly got protective of them.

    Although, I do sort of feel that it maybe flared up a little quickly. I thought the interviewer was just being curious, not truly rude.

    But I imagine it was heading that way, and it was good of the guys to step in and stop it when they did. I love that they walked out, too. I would kill to see something like that. XD

    This has me really anxious for the next chapter!
    March 12th, 2014 at 07:41am
  • fiction246

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    Secrets out!! And that guy was a douche. Can't wait for more :)
    March 12th, 2014 at 02:23am
  • efflorescxnt

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    @ Anchor and Hope.
    Ahaha yayy!
    January 13th, 2014 at 04:03pm
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    @ xxGee

    Haha! I promise you'll see some cute! tehe
    January 13th, 2014 at 05:27am
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    @ Anchor and Hope.
    Aw well at least some cute?:P
    January 13th, 2014 at 05:02am
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    @ xxGee

    Aw! I'm so glad you liked it! It'll be very little cute. I'm thinking it's going to be a lot of heartbreak and picking up the pieces Cry
    January 11th, 2014 at 08:00pm
  • efflorescxnt

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    Oh my god finally! That was the most romantic thing ever I died xD I'd like to see memories of when they first met as teenagers, maybe just some cute stuff like that haha.
    January 11th, 2014 at 08:09am
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    @ Haylie Jaed

    Right? We all need men like Zacky in our lives. Cry

    @ fiction246

    Haha. That's okay! Thanks for reading! Cute

    @ InHyacinthAndGold

    Aw! Thanks you so much! I'm so glad you like it! You will definitely see Zack on his way to propose! It's actually where the sequel is going to kick off! tehe
    January 10th, 2014 at 04:27pm
  • InHyacinthAndGold

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    I just read through the entire 21 chapters of this story in one sitting. It's very well written and you take time for the story to develop. I can't wait for the sequel to start!
    What memories should you include in the sequel?
    -when they first see/meet each other
    -Zack asking her out on a date/to be his girlfriend
    -typical teenage antics (sneaking around, curfew, sex, etc.)
    -Mia finding out about the pregnancy
    -Zack on his way to propose to Mia all those years ago
    January 9th, 2014 at 10:55pm
  • fiction246

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    Great chapter :) what a sweet date!!! I don't know in terms of memories...I'm horrible at coming up with ideas haha
    January 9th, 2014 at 12:43am
  • Haylie Jaed

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    Wow, what an up and down chapter! =O Probably should have seen that coming, but I didn't. It never even crossed my mind.

    That date...sounds perfect. Time to find a man like Zacky!

    I'm not awake enough to think of any memories at this point in time, but if anything comes to me I'll let you know. =P
    January 8th, 2014 at 11:28pm
  • mrsmshadz

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    Awesome I can't wait!!!
    November 13th, 2013 at 05:47pm
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    @ mrsmshadz

    Aw! Thank you so much! You're too sweet!
    I just see him as a really great dad (probably because he's so great with his niece and nephew) I'm hoping to have the next update out by the end of this week/beginning of next Cute
    November 13th, 2013 at 12:36pm
  • mrsmshadz

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    This is the best Zacky story I've ever read!!! He's such a perfect dad!!! I can't wait til the next update!! Hopefully it's soon!!!!
    November 13th, 2013 at 07:31am
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    @ gothique4

    Aw! Thank you!
    I'm so glad you're excited, because I am SO SO SO excited for you guys to get a better look into those 14 years. tehe but I am also really excited for you guys to read the ending to this!
    November 4th, 2013 at 11:05pm