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  • Lacey  Gates

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    Love it
    March 14th, 2013 at 07:11am
  • mabbitch

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    YOU WENT INTO FIRST PERSON, DANNY BABY. STOP DOING THAT.
    anyways, short chapter is short, but a good way to end the story.
    now... I want a sequel. ;w;
    but then again, how the bejesus would that work out?
    anywhore, loved it. <3
    January 25th, 2013 at 01:06am
  • mabbitch

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    all of this drama & crap... my fucking heart can't take all of this going on! I don't fucking like it when this makes my emotions go all over the place.
    WHY THE HELL ARE YOU DOING THIS TO MEH. ;__________;
    & THEN BRIAN FUCKING ADMITS THAT HE LOVES MATT. AFTER SO MANY CHAPTERS, HE FINALLY ADMITS IT TO HIM.
    & of course, RIGHT BEFORE HE CHANGES HIM.
    January 19th, 2013 at 11:45pm
  • DryIce.

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    Oh. My. God.

    ;~;
    January 14th, 2013 at 07:46pm
  • mabbitch

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    How do you slowly shoot up in bed? Does it like go in slow motion or something? xD
    fucking demon. throw a fucking stake through his heart for killing Jay. ;w;
    January 14th, 2013 at 06:08pm
  • Meagan_Mayhem

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    Please, please, please, don't kill Jimmy! Please. Sad I don't want to be a sad panda. :S
    January 13th, 2013 at 10:46pm
  • mabbitch

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    I forgot that Jay's dead... I still hate you for that, I hope you realise this.
    & then you have Jimbo being all macho man & being cocky. Way to be cocky, Jimmy. .___.
    JIMMY BABY. NO DON'T CRY. I CAN'T HANDLE HIM CRYING OR EVEN HIM LETTING OUT A TEAR. WHY.
    I feel bad for Jimmy now... ;w;
    January 9th, 2013 at 11:54pm
  • mabbitch

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    I figured you'd include something like this since you mostly tell me pretty much EVERYTHING THAT HAPPENS WITH THIS STORY. & then ask me to forget about twenty minutes later.
    ahw... Brian's falling in love with Tucky. ;w; my heart, the feels of what she's telling him.. I can't handle this all. :c
    January 6th, 2013 at 05:40pm
  • IveGotSoManyAnchors;

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    @ DryIce.
    ;-; Well, ask ANOTHER :'3
    January 2nd, 2013 at 03:30am
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    @TheEnemyOfEverything

    All my questions are to do with the major plotline though xD
    January 2nd, 2013 at 03:27am
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    @ DryIce.
    That's a really good question, sadly I can't answer that because that question will be answered in a few chapters. I'm happy to answer any other questions you have.
    January 2nd, 2013 at 03:21am
  • DryIce.

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    @TheEnemyOfEverything

    Really? XD Ok, well what was in the sky D;
    January 2nd, 2013 at 03:16am
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    @ DryIce.
    What about one question per chapter?
    January 2nd, 2013 at 03:14am
  • DryIce.

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    ... and the plot thickens. I love how you leave me with more questions. What I hate most is being told everything about a plot all at once, I like questions, in fact I love them and I have so many. ;~; I love the last line this it really makes the reader think :3
    January 2nd, 2013 at 02:00am
  • mabbitch

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    "... like a lost puppy..." I am seriously hating you so much right now. How the fuck could you kill someone like Jay off!? ;-; That's just... My heart... & Matt.. & then... at least everyone else is okay, BUT WHY DID IT HAVE TO BE JAY. fucking hell... ;-; you better update soon.
    January 1st, 2013 at 05:30pm
  • DryIce.

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    @ TheEnemyOfEverything
    AWEH :3 Now that made me smile :3
    It's a little smile chain :D
    December 29th, 2012 at 07:48am
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    @ DryIce.
    I believe your comment just made me smile like the complete idiot I am <3
    December 29th, 2012 at 05:02am
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    ;~; I have no words for the feelz, that was the most intense chapter yet. I was like, on the edge leaning over my computer reading it like OMG WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. Holy shit, this totally explains why Jimmy wasn't fond of Brian liking him at the start. I totally didn't see this coming, pure genius :3 Well done, please update soon! :3
    December 28th, 2012 at 01:43pm
  • mabbitch

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    Okay... The way you put that tension between Jimmy & Bri is beyond unreal. I literally feel it radiating off the two of them & with The whole trust between the two.. Fucking hell, why do you do this to me, dammit? & then Tuck possibly being the demon from Jimmy's past; that's just... I can't even find words for it ._. You need to update this soon ;w; must update soon!
    December 26th, 2012 at 03:08am
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    He felt her arms around his bare torso and his eyes shut softly in content. Her touch was one of things that kept him going through the day. Her kisses, her touch, everything about her. To be inside of her was a blessing none the less. Jimmy was just absolutely in love and he knew from the moment that he met her what he was getting himself into. He knew that if she died before her time that he would die along with her.

    "Nothing love, work was tiring, how was your day?" Jimmy responded to her.

    Her voice, damn her voice. It was like his own private symphony. He turned around in her arms and peered down into her hazel eyes. He reached up and traced her jaw all the way to the outline of her lips. A light blush formed on her cheeks which drove him crazy.


    This description of their love is what made this flashback so heartbreaking omg. Wow, just wow. Really I think that was amazing, and really sad. I'd love to find out more about this mysterious creator and who this nameless demon is! Also sort of 'Demon Lore' obviously further down the line though because I'm excited to know what happens to Brian and Matt :P Keep it up! I love this :3
    xox
    December 23rd, 2012 at 04:47pm