YOU WENT INTO FIRST PERSON, DANNY BABY. STOP DOING THAT. anyways, short chapter is short, but a good way to end the story. now... I want a sequel. ;w; but then again, how the bejesus would that work out? anywhore, loved it. <3
all of this drama & crap... my fucking heart can't take all of this going on! I don't fucking like it when this makes my emotions go all over the place. WHY THE HELL ARE YOU DOING THIS TO MEH. ;__________; & THEN BRIAN FUCKING ADMITS THAT HE LOVES MATT. AFTER SO MANY CHAPTERS, HE FINALLY ADMITS IT TO HIM. & of course, RIGHT BEFORE HE CHANGES HIM.
How do you slowly shoot up in bed? Does it like go in slow motion or something? xD fucking demon. throw a fucking stake through his heart for killing Jay. ;w;
I forgot that Jay's dead... I still hate you for that, I hope you realise this. & then you have Jimbo being all macho man & being cocky. Way to be cocky, Jimmy. .___. JIMMY BABY. NO DON'T CRY. I CAN'T HANDLE HIM CRYING OR EVEN HIM LETTING OUT A TEAR. WHY. I feel bad for Jimmy now... ;w;
I figured you'd include something like this since you mostly tell me pretty much EVERYTHING THAT HAPPENS WITH THIS STORY. & then ask me to forget about twenty minutes later. ahw... Brian's falling in love with Tucky. ;w; my heart, the feels of what she's telling him.. I can't handle this all. :c
@ DryIce. That's a really good question, sadly I can't answer that because that question will be answered in a few chapters. I'm happy to answer any other questions you have.
... and the plot thickens. I love how you leave me with more questions. What I hate most is being told everything about a plot all at once, I like questions, in fact I love them and I have so many. ;~; I love the last line this it really makes the reader think :3
"... like a lost puppy..." I am seriously hating you so much right now. How the fuck could you kill someone like Jay off!? ;-; That's just... My heart... & Matt.. & then... at least everyone else is okay, BUT WHY DID IT HAVE TO BE JAY. fucking hell... ;-; you better update soon.
;~; I have no words for the feelz, that was the most intense chapter yet. I was like, on the edge leaning over my computer reading it like OMG WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. Holy shit, this totally explains why Jimmy wasn't fond of Brian liking him at the start. I totally didn't see this coming, pure genius :3 Well done, please update soon! :3
Okay... The way you put that tension between Jimmy & Bri is beyond unreal. I literally feel it radiating off the two of them & with The whole trust between the two.. Fucking hell, why do you do this to me, dammit? & then Tuck possibly being the demon from Jimmy's past; that's just... I can't even find words for it ._. You need to update this soon ;w; must update soon!
He felt her arms around his bare torso and his eyes shut softly in content. Her touch was one of things that kept him going through the day. Her kisses, her touch, everything about her. To be inside of her was a blessing none the less. Jimmy was just absolutely in love and he knew from the moment that he met her what he was getting himself into. He knew that if she died before her time that he would die along with her.
"Nothing love, work was tiring, how was your day?" Jimmy responded to her.
Her voice, damn her voice. It was like his own private symphony. He turned around in her arms and peered down into her hazel eyes. He reached up and traced her jaw all the way to the outline of her lips. A light blush formed on her cheeks which drove him crazy.
This description of their love is what made this flashback so heartbreaking omg. Wow, just wow. Really I think that was amazing, and really sad. I'd love to find out more about this mysterious creator and who this nameless demon is! Also sort of 'Demon Lore' obviously further down the line though because I'm excited to know what happens to Brian and Matt :P Keep it up! I love this :3 xox