The Wrong Oiler - Comments

I liked it, and I think the ending was solid. You didn't promise anything but there could be more there. I like where you left it.
I can't wait for an Ebs story :D

I wasn't expecting that with Taylor, but I reckon it's about time he grew up. And I can't wait to read a sequel or the Ebs story, he's a little cutie

I can't wait for an update, I just have to see what happens with Taylor and Chris.

definitely excited to read more! i hope she forgives taylor!

Maybe Nuge can find a girl for himself, he can't be mooning after Chris the whole time. And maybe Taylor is going to grow up now

Oh God, Chris might as well might have declared her revenge for Taylor acting like an asshat complete with that one action. Because I just know that Taylor is going to regret not being there to see his son born and see him the moment he was born instead of as a spectator with Jordan and Ryan. I hope this applause isn't too early but go Ryan for starting to realize that he needs to build a bridge and get over it in a sense, because everything with him being pissed off at Taylor for stealing Chris but right now the only people who matter here are Chris and that little boy and if Taylor is who they're meant to be with, it's good he's finally accepting this. What he needs is a girlfriend who will make him happy and will see him as the best guy in the world for him to get his own happy family eventually. I have a feeling Ryan might tell Chris that she and Taylor have to try to get more comfortable for the sake of this baby, and we might see the two of them living together and work on their relationship.

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Yep! Things are just a bit hectic with school and I'm currently moving

i just found this story! Will you be updating / finishing this story?

I have no idea how this is going to end right now, Taylor is being an ass and Ryan knows she doesn't love him and Jordan is the voice of reason. This is so crazy right now

Okay first I must say, I love Jordan in the sense that he's the voice of reason here. Sometimes I honestly think Jordan says what I'm trying to yell at these guys in my head. Now, what Ryan needs, honestly, is a girlfriend, or at least some friends to rant to without a horse in this derby. Because his two best friends are A) Taylor aka the other guy in love with Chris who she's, in all honesty, in love with, and B) a guy in Jordan who is team Taylor based on how he's trying so hard to point out that Ryan is trying to ignore the elephant in the room that is the baby. If he was able to rant to someone not involved or get out and date, not a random hookup at a bar, he might be able to get over Chris since right now she's the forbidden fruit that he can touch, but if he does hell will be raised. And good God, Taylor. He wins brownie points for the valiant sentiment but their are ways to get that point across that aren't as idiotic if the point is for that person to stay or appearing like an asshole. How saying that Chris is screwing his social life and his game all while calling his son a mistake like a drunken frat boy referring to crazy things he did ala The Hangover is saying I want you to make sure you love me for me is, in a word, perplexing. You can tell they both want to be together but she's now been alone in this parenting expedition twice and he needs to do something to prove he's committed to her and his son. Chris honestly needs to stay with a neutral party (someone helps her get her own place) because otherwise Ryan's house will be the next coming of the Garden of Eden with Ryan's inability to resist temptation. I can't wait until the baby is born because I have a feeling seeing Taylor support her during labor (hopefully) and showing his immense love for their son might bring them back together. Update soon!

Okay first I must say, I love Jordan in the sense that he's the voice of reason here. Sometimes I honestly think Jordan says what I'm trying to yell at these guys in my head. Now, what Ryan needs, honestly, is a girlfriend, or at least some friends to rant to without a horse in this derby. Because his two best friends are A) Taylor aka the other guy in love with Chris who she's, in all honesty, in love with, and B) a guy in Jordan who is team Taylor based on how he's trying so hard to point out that Ryan is trying to ignore the elephant in the room that is the baby. If he was able to rant to someone not involved or get out and date, not a random hookup at a bar, he might be able to get over Chris since right now she's the forbidden fruit that he can touch, but if he does hell will be raised. And goo God, Taylor. He wins brownie points for the valiant sentiment but their are ways to get that point across that aren't as idiotic if the point is for that person to stay or appearing like an asshole. How saying that Chris is screwing his social life and his game all while calling his son a mistake like a drunken frat boy referring to crazy things he did ala The Hangover is saying I want you to make sure you love me for me is, in a word, perplexing. You can tell they both want to be together but she's now been alone in this parenting expedition twice and he needs to do something to prove he's committed to her and his son. Chris honestly needs to stay with a neutral party (someone helps her get her own place) because otherwise Ryan's house will be the next coming of the Garden of Eden with Ryan's inability to resist temptation. I can't wait until the baby is born because I have a feeling seeing Taylor support her during labor (hopefully) and showing his immense love for their son might bring them back together. Update soon!

Team Jordan for the random! No, really, I just don't like the animosity between the teammates. So whoever she ends up with, (and maybe it's no one! Or someone not a hockey player! Why does she need a guy at all at this point?), I want Ryan and Taylor to be friends or at least friendly again.

'cause seriously, a baby is not a good reason to force a relationship. A baby's job is to be a baby. It's not to save a relationship much less make a relationship form. That is way too much pressure on the child. And Maybe Chris needs a chance to stand on her own two feet. In Edmonton, maybe. Live on her own. Let Taylor and his teammates be a part of her kid's life but figure out the mom thing before she tries to add a relationship to her workload. Because newborns are a lot of work and adding one to your life can stress even the most secure, loving, and longterm of relationships.

Taylor, Taylor, Taylor. I understand this is hard for him, he went straight from a guy with a new girl in bed overnight with no responsibilities to a boyfriend with a baby on the way. But what I don't understand is why he is letting Ryan basically carry Chris off into the sunset. Because Chris has all the power here and I wouldn't be shocked if she felt vindictive and didn't tell Taylor until the baby is born and even if she does invite him to the labor I think (contingent on them being in a relationship) she might not interfere if Ryan attempts to cut into things traditional for the dad to do (cut the chord, hold Chris's hand, hold the baby). I think Ryan will try to act like the baby's dad, and I think Chris will give her son her last name (and maybe Ryan as a godfather) as an screw you to Taylor (it's a huge slap in the face as she planned on giving the baby his last name even when she wasn't going to tell him; definitely bruising his ego). I think that Taylor needs to be reminded when Ryan said that he would gladly be a step dad and that Taylor runs the risk that Chris will settle for Ryan and his son will start to see Ryan as 'daddy'. He needs a wakeup call, maybe he sees one of the guys with their wives and kids (specifically young sons) and realizes he still wants that with Chris. Or maybe his game or happiness (or both) suffer even more with Chris and the baby gone and while trying to figure out how this could still be happening he sees a family and remembers what he could have had. Or maybe when he's supposed to enjoy the bachelor life he craved with some random woman and finds himself longing for the same body (Chris's) in the morning and to come home to along with missing his unborn son and recalling that his son wasn't a mistake. Update soon!

oh my gosh did that really just happen. Such a good chapter!

Wow, looks like Ryan is starting to look like the good guy :O Poor Chris, Taylor really needs to get his ass kicked by Jordan and the entire team

Poor Taylor, but he better not dump Chris. I know the morning sickness sucks and she's not acting the most rational right now, but he better not abandon her because he's going to have everyone gunning for him

Dear lord, Taylor better not be starting to reconsider his willingness to forgo the rest of his bachelor years. Because any hesitation will send Chris packing and Ryan sprinting towards her more then ready to step in. The problem is pregnancy makes women loopy at times, we've all heard of the stereotypical pregnant woman telling her significant other that "this is your fault!" But Aliya and Joan aren't helping matters. I understand that their losing their sister/best friend to Taylor and the baby, but the more doubt they put in each of their heads the more likely Chris or Taylor is to freak out. My feeling is Taylor will tell Jordan of this fight and Jordan will let it slip to Ryan and then Ryan will be going full speed on Operation: Win Chris Back. God I just hep these two get their act together and that any possible Ryan/Chris reunion ends before the baby is born, because if not there will be a power struggle between Ryan and Taylor over things during labor (chord cutting, hand holding etc...). Update soon.

This is really good. Part of me wants to see what Taylor's going to say to the media and the fans about Chris, because opinions have obviously already been formed and you never can underestimate a crazy fangirl convinced that if they get rid of the wife/girlfriend/fiancee/significant other that the guy will come rushing to them and declaring their undying love for said fangirl. Also I wonder what Ryan is really thinking, seeing a girl he's in love with now pregnant and blissfully playing happy family with his teammate. Plus I bet Taylor will be bursting at the seems and doing the proud dad-to-be thing by telling everyone in a twelve mile radius about he's getting a little buddy or mini-him to teach hockey to and rough around with. Ryan will no doubt hear this, whether Taylor deliberately plans for him to or not, and unless Chris explains to him that barring Taylor royally messing up (i.e. cheating or completely running away once the idea of fatherhood inches closer to reality) she will be with Taylor. But my feeling is Ryan will do anything to try and make Taylor seem less attractive as a father. One drunken night on the road and suddenly Ryan can twist it against Taylor in multiple ways. Honestly though Ryan needs to 'build a bridge and get over it', and the sooner the better. Because once this little boy is born and sees Ryan as pseudo uncle does he really plan on still trying to break up the kid's parents and harbor feelings for Chris? Someone needs to explain this to him now or else he's in for a cold dose of reality when I expect he'll try something that will temporarily get him the girl and leave Taylor left as the odd man out and then Taylor and Chris will end up getting back together and living as a family with their son and Ryan gets treated as a pariah for trying to steal his friend's pregnant girlfriend and in turn his son. Can't wait for the next update.

Taylor is so cute with Chris and their baby I hate those stupid websites too, it's nothing but stupid groupies gossiping about guys

Wow, Taylor not better fuck this up :O