This Wasn't Suppose to Happen - Comments

  • steph1984

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    Ah Sid, we knew you'd see right in the end. : )

    Family is your everything and when push came to shove. You couldn't walk away from your family.

    Baby Crosby better have Sids lips. He/she is too little to have his butt. Yet Mr. Green
    November 19th, 2012 at 09:55pm
  • JTCC1950

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    Aww Sidney is too cute in this chapter, it's great! :)
    November 19th, 2012 at 09:43pm
  • soupy

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    Sid's POV echoed what I believe his true response would be - his family is very important to him and so is doing the right thing.

    Yes, there may be fall out, but I think the fact that his Dad committed to him that he would support him no matter what he decided ultimately told Sid what he had to do. What his parents had taught him to do.

    Well written!!
    November 19th, 2012 at 09:42pm
  • steph1984

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    I'd have loved to have seen a short paragraph from Sids pov while he was watching the ultrasound. After everything they've been through. It would have been intresting to know what was going through his mind as he was watching their baby in the screen.

    It's so good to see Sid finally come round and be the support that janelle needs. This baby is going to have two of the best parents anyone could ever ask for.
    November 19th, 2012 at 10:12am
  • soupy

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    I am glad that Sid is starting to come around and be a part of the pregnancy. And what I also like is that he is trying to be understanding of Janelle's feelings. Yes, he wanted to know the sex of the baby, but he yielded to her decision - and even supported her decision. He was making sure that she was ok with short texts - and then the SUV.

    I dont for a second believe that he did that just for the baby - that was the excuse he gave Janelle because he knew that it was the only way she would accept it. Sid understands that Janelle is fiercely independent and is not asking for anything from him - so he has to be careful in giving her things.

    I think Janelle is a little leery of Sid's motivations - which is understandable - but I think she is feeling a bit better about his attitude and involvement.

    Hope we get more soon!
    November 19th, 2012 at 05:42am
  • Sportsfan83

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    Yes!! Sid is coming around....he's gonna love his baby!! and he's gonna love Janelle!! YES. And he can buy me a car anytime he wants!
    November 19th, 2012 at 05:26am
  • kartal1984

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    I really like this story! Keep the updates coming :)
    November 16th, 2012 at 05:27pm
  • MusicLover525

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    I like this story! I wonder how Sidney will decide.. He's a little difficult to se though.. :P
    November 16th, 2012 at 06:32am
  • nikijamiie

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    LOVE both of your sid stories once again keep up the work, your doing great and all these stories at once is great! love it
    November 16th, 2012 at 05:33am
  • teaspoons.of.sober

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    Thanks for the added bonus chapter it was great to see what sid is really thinking. I still hope he comes around n decides to help Janelle with the baby :-) update again soon please :-) can't wait for more :-)
    November 16th, 2012 at 05:02am
  • soupy

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    I like the added Sid POV chapter - I think it gives the reader a little more insight into what the characters are going through. I understand that you are wanting to tell from Janelle's point of view - and that has been great - but it is nice to know where Sid's head is at.
    I hope he realizes that Janelle is giving him a gift by telling him he isnt obligated in any way to be involved with the baby - they he could preserve everything he has. But I also hope he realizes that isnt a luxury that Janelle has herself. No matter what she decides about the baby, her life will be altered forever.

    Yes, Sid has a lot to lose in this - I am sure all of his endorsement contracts have a "morality clause" that they could envoke at any time if he behaved in a manner "unbecoming" to their product - and a baby out of wedlock could give the companies an out if they wanted.

    But he also has a child to gain - what would have become of him, if his father had walked away from his mother?
    November 16th, 2012 at 03:28am
  • kendra-rae

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    It was good to see what Sidney was thinking! Cannot wait for more:)
    November 16th, 2012 at 03:19am
  • steph1984

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    Is love to see more chapters from Sids pov. That was absolutely perfect. To me he's a very scared young man that's been handed probably the most scary and demanding job that will ever be asked of him.

    This isn't the 50's and having a ring on your finger doesn't make you a good parent. The nuclear family no longer exists and the family role has changed. A child who grows up with two parents who get along with each other will probably have a much healthier upbringing than one who's parents live together and just don't get along.

    Hopefully Sid will see what's right and be a good daddy to his baby.

    Great update
    November 16th, 2012 at 03:15am
  • Sportsfan83

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    Hells yes!! This is freakin awesome!!! I know how form he is. Come on Sid...turn it Around!! Don't make me wait for updates! Love it!
    November 16th, 2012 at 03:09am
  • Yaribarr

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    :o I love this story! I'm so excited for the next chapter. Update again soon please.
    November 15th, 2012 at 09:14pm
  • Nyx007

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    Hun, it is your story. If you want to make Sid out to be the biggest asshole known to man, you can. You've made it clear that this is a fictitious story; run with it. If people don't like it they don't have to read it. Write what you want.
    November 15th, 2012 at 07:59pm
  • soupy

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    And was she really wearing "zig techs"?

    Awesome!!
    November 15th, 2012 at 07:37pm
  • soupy

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    The fact that you have portrayed Sid as a dick is definitely a departure from what we are used to seeing - but isnt that what fiction is all about - putting your own spin on your own story!

    And as much as Sid was a cold and heartless dick, that serves as part of your conflict in the story. Conflict, as much as it takes the reader on a roller coaster, is what truly drives a story. It polarizes your readers and encourages them to invest themselves in your tale.

    I am a big fan of Sid's - the real guy - and the fact that you could alter my "view" of him with your writing is a testiment of what a good job you have done. You made me believe he was a jerk!

    I think you should tell the story your way - you do a great job. I really cant wait to see where you take this next!
    November 15th, 2012 at 07:32pm
  • Sportsfan83

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    Jesus Woman, stop distracting me from my job!!! lol. That was awesome.
    November 15th, 2012 at 07:30pm
  • steph1984

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    Janelle is my hero. Not many women will tell the father of their unborn child to walk away. It took some major inner stenght to say what she did and I admire her so much for that.

    Can I marry Nate please ? I love him, he's just amazing and I think we all need a Nate in our lives.

    Yes the way Sid handled the whole situation was crappy. But I think it was the only way he new how to.(like a lot of men his age do) Hopefully know he and janelle can meet somewhere in the middle and they can start to get along better.

    Amazing update
    November 15th, 2012 at 07:28pm