So many emotions, I can't even begin! Katherine is a terrible mother and I believe she should've tried harder, even if she didn't feel like she could be a mother. Gerard gets on my nerves, but I mean, you can't stay mad at him long, he's so endearing with his slick talk and his handsome face, can't ignore his charm forever
I really love your story. I'm really glad it's in third person so you can see what each person is feeling. That aspect really benefits this story. Also amazing charecterization with Leo. I find it really cool how you can depict Leo's personality so well, even if he's a shy charecter. Overall I'm hooked.