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What's a 'thing'?

What's a 'thing'?

That is the CUTEST FUUU JUST THING EVER. JUST.



I want all your OCs miniaturized and in a box. Okay?

Wow what a great chapter! never expected that she'd jump in and take on that monstrous man. What a clever move. She's obviously so much more than she appeared.
Hope Seungri is ok, he must be hurt badly. The searches outside, now a fixed cage match.
There are bad things afoot

Since apparently I always forget to comment on the first update, this one's another two-in-oner!

GD is such a sweetheart, in my opinion. Unlike T.O.P. who's acting a bit like an a hole *cough* but given his persona, I get that. I just hope he doesn't do anything to Hyun Ae. I also ship her and Daesung, just saying~

Omg I was not expecting that. You go Hyun Ae! I always thought she was a bamf. I hope she's okay and same for Seungri, poor baby.

WOW, fantastic baby I did NOT see that coming. A cage match?!?!

Gosh, I like this kick-assery that occurred in this chapter...and I have to say I am a bit scared for Seungri when Daesung finds out his lover was almost squished by a mammoth inside a cage...XD

Annnnnnnd...she kicks ass. :D

Um... wow. My face went from this when I saw the title of the chapter and what was happening to Seungri, to this when Hyun Ae stepped in to save him. The way you described everything is amazing and makes me feel like I'm watching a live MMA match. It was nice to hear a little about Seungri and how he got into fighting, as well as how he gets when he's in a match. As for Hyun Ae, she definately has some hidden strengths. I mean, she did what Seungri instructed her to do, which was run, but she outsmarted her opponent. I just hope she didn't take too much damage aside from the broken sternum and that Daesung isn't too angry with her or Seungri.

As usual, this was amazing and I'm eagerly awaiting your next update.

I love TOP's aloofish manner. He's so in control and a perfect foil for the other nicer members. GD is still a bit of a mystery, he seems friendly but must be strong underneath.
Can't help wondering why Hyun Ae would be of particular interest, why she would be hunted for rather than others that have escaped.
Suengri is a lovely character, I like his self-defense lesson one. He's gentle despite being a fighter.
Daesung would be a very obvious interest for Hyun Ae, but I think you could think more on it as I'm sure the story could get more complicated. I could see ways of her going with any of them. It's good to keep your audience guessing how things will work out.

Omg, TOP's comment makes me feel like he's threatening Daesung & Hyun Ae. It's like he's saying Hyun Ae is a threat to the future of BIGBANG and he'll do whatever it takes to eliminate the threat if the need arises.

GD was really sweet, in my opinion, in telling her that they might be after her. I mean, he scared her but I think he was really being sincere when he says he just wanted to prepare her/thought she should know. Also, /flails yay! More Seungri! His self defense lesson cracks me up. I didn't expect him to run away from her to make a point. All in all, a great update!

I THINK DAESUNG IS A POSSIBLE LOVE INTEREST. HIM AND HIS ATTACHMENT.

Omg. I find it interesting that this Asia is cut off from the rest of the world. Did you know of the Japanese isolation policy? I think many Asian countries had isolation policies at one point or another. And I'm pretty sure you'd consider North Korea under some form of isolation policy (duh, huh?). But it really interest me how this future of Asia plays out. Yeah. I squealed when I noticed the parallels. And I squeal at T.O.P., but that's another thing all together.

Hyun Ae is so adorable. And at the end. Seungri. OmG. YES. Ha, ha.

GOSH, I love this story.

I'm really worried for Hyun Ae. I want her to be safe. But it also makes me so curious...why go after her? I feel like there is a bit more than the fact that she was the slave that got away scenario...hmm...

LOL, I love the humor of Seungri! And I think it's awesome that she's going to him for self-defense lessons. I want to see her get stronger!

I found one teeny-tinny grammar thing...

“Its between us that are somewhat head of BigBang,” Daesung explained...
~It's

That's it! Sorry for the lack of gifs this time around, yet again...I couldn't seem to find one fitting.
I am selfishly looking forward for more!! =D

T.O.P YAY. Ugh he's the perfect cold-like, serious assassin. I just imagined his serious, calculating glances and couldn't help but squeal a little. I just love that man. But yay everyone has been revealed!

This chapter was also fab. Seungri and Taeyang's bickering was adorable and I could totally see it. I really loved how Hyun Ae was with the slave girl--comforting her and all that. But aw Taeyang's goal to bring his family home. I'm cheering for him already.

I can't wait for the next update! :D

It is so easy to see all the characters as you read. Even though the situation is so far from reality you can really picture the guys in the roles you have given them. the friendly bickering over cards was so realistic and easy to imagine.
I love how Hyun Ae is finding her own feet and developing a role for herself. Her compassion is very evident. The more we learn about her the more we see what sort of person she is and how she is growing stronger.
Her relationship with Daesung, Suengri and Taeyang is so easy and comfortable, a long way from where she began.
I wouldn't worry too much about a love interest just yet, we are still learning so much about everyone and the place they are living in. I'm sure as you write the idea will come naturally to you.

LOL, I love Seungri's childishness. It's so like him. XD Him bickering with Taeyang is just...gah. XD I just love the friendship between them...between all of them. Almost brotherly...

~(LOL, JK not THAT close, Seungri. =P)

I really liked how mellow Hyun Ae is becoming, considering the horrible obstacles and scars she is still working on overcoming. It really shows that she is a very strong girl---and I really, really have to respect her for it. Seriously, I'm just loving this story more and more; I like reading things that stir some reaction out of me. And you're doing that and more. =D

And I gotta say, seeing Hyun Ae's "progress" in getting better makes my heart swell. I love how nurturing she is. I didn't expect this from her when I first started this story, but it really fits her character. And with the little tidbit that you put in for her history, like her being the eldest, it makes a whole lot of sense. I really am cheering for her recovery with every chapter.

I also love the working relationship she has developed not just with Daesung, but now with Taeyang. It's great to see her slowly but surely gaining the ability to trust and building bridges like this.
Taeyang...hmmm, this man...


MMMmmmm...just gahdakjfakdhjfkajhe....

~T.O.P, you make meh jelly...XD

...And not to be a grammar Nazi, but I just thought I would point out these tiny-tiny errors.

“Aish,” Daesung grumbled. “Just because you're loosing terribly, doesn't mean we're cheating. Let's get back to the game.”

“Its alright.” She spoke softly, deliberately...
~should be 'losing' and 'It's'

...Gah, I didn't mean to write you an essay. XD Sorry for the spammage, I shall leave it here.
LOVED the update, if you didn't notice by my abuse of the word LOVE. =P Can't wait for more!!

/flailing Seungri right at the start of the chapter! You're feeding my fangirl self here.

Aw, this make me adore Taeyang even more. The fact that he's rescuing them from all the things they've gone through and is doing what he can to keep them safe makes him seem honorable. I'm a little saddened by his attitude regarding his past, as it seems that he holds himself responsible for their 'abduction'. I like that Hyun Ae was gentle with Eun Hee and worked to keep her calm throughout the entire process.

Once again, a wonderful update and I look forward to more.

Oh well done, TOP is the perfect cold killer, I could just imagine the looks. His eyes are so deep and he can look so imposing compared to the other guys. I love the way Hyun Ae is developing relationships and how she is a bit feisty now she's recovered. her exchanges with TOP showed a side of her we hadn't seen yet.

Eeee! Ahem, sorry that's me fangirling because Seungri was included in this chapter.

I love, and I do mean love, how it seems like there's a hint of bonding/possible feelings (in my opinion anyway) between Hyun Ae and Daesung. I see it in the way he talks to and complements her. Either way, feelings or no, it's super cute. Also, adore how T.O.P was introduced. I can really see him being stubborn and Hyun Ae's frustration over it. The bit about all the scars he has makes me interested in his past. I know it's revealed in this chapter that he was a killer for Doe-chang, but I'm interested in how he sustained all those injuries. Maybe we'll hear a little about it from GD?

Either way, this was an amazing update and I look forward to more!

Omg~. T.O.P~

AYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!
This was awesome!! I had been waiting for this update for like AGES. XD

I love how Hyun Ae is adjusting well. I think her occupation and purpose among BIGBANG is just so fitting. It's nice to see her finally healing.
I know you said you were thinking hard about how to introduce T.O.P. but I think you did an amazing job. I keep on seeing Vick, and how scary he was...XD

Anyways, I want to get to know all these characters! Can't wait for the next update!! XD

You have a wonderful imagination. I know how hard it is to put what you see in your mind into words, it never feels quite right, but rest assured your descriptions are very detailed and give a clear picture of the setting and the characters. Early on in a story there is so much that needs to be put in place before you can really get into the action. Don't worry about it seeming slow to introduce everyone, better to set the scene well than to rush and then realise you've left things out and have to keep adding in later. Daesung's character is building up and I know the others will show new aspects as the story progresses and each is introduced. Curious as to who is next!

I find the backstory and extra details about the war quite interesting. I'll have you know, however, that they've made me hope that BigBang get their hands on this Doh-Chang guy and give him hell. Lots of it. I love Hyun Ae's little 'Oops' when Daesung mentions that she was basically on top of BigBang's hideout. It's a sort of sheepish, 'oh my bad' remark that I find adorable. I like that she's become more comfortable around Daesung, enough to tell him what happened to her. It shows she trusts him, at least, if no one else. And Taeyang! <3 I like how he seems sympathetic to her reaction. He seems like a real sweetie. Aha, and Deasung's little remark about who's job was cooler is adorable.

I look forward to your next update! And I hope to see Seungri and T.O.P soon. :D