Hold Your Hand - Comments

  • pawnsinplay

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    Reading this again.

    I think I love it more each time. <3
    March 22nd, 2013 at 05:23pm
  • Madam Shadows;

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    That was so adorable. ♥
    December 2nd, 2012 at 03:41am
  • headrushxreeta

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    Omg i finally read this and I oh so love it!! Its hot in the beginning, kinda sad, then adorable and sweet, especially when Brian finally says he wants what Lyndsey wants. I really loved this, darling!! :)
    November 17th, 2012 at 05:46pm
  • FallBackDown

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    Aww that was adorable!!! Loved it from beginning to end ;) xx
    November 15th, 2012 at 09:54pm
  • foREVer_Synyster

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    Naw! So cute! You totally had me hooked with the first paragraph. :)
    November 8th, 2012 at 11:30am
  • gipsy danger.

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    THAT WAS ADORABLE. GOODNESS YES!
    I absolutely loved this. It was fantastic! And goodness I can relate to hating those girls that you mentioned in the beginning. Can we push them into holes? LOL
    Yes, I loved it and I always get so excited when you post things! Amazing! <3
    November 7th, 2012 at 08:25pm
  • Call The Angels

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    Well that was a bit raunchy at the beginning!
    Totally cute at the end though. :)
    Loved it dear.
    November 6th, 2012 at 11:23pm
  • pawnsinplay

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    D'aaaaw that ending.

    I can never quite get over the fact that you write things and put me in them. And the fact that what you write is so damn good just makes it that much better. I loved every word of this! Especially the beginning because to be honest, I really do hate those girls too. But I loved this! It was so perfect and cute and perfect. LOVE IT BUBBLE! <333
    November 6th, 2012 at 09:47pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    Well, I must admit that straight up I fully agree with the first paragraph. I can't stand girls like that, especially when they whine and complain about their situation, but do nothing to change it. Women these days need to learn to responsibility for their own choices when it comes to men... and stop blaming them for all the wrong in their lives. I have too many friends with assholes for boyfriends and just lap up the shitty treatment they receive. So frustrating.

    Having said all that, I can't say I'm not guilty of letting a guy treat me like shit while I sat there hoping that one day he'd wake up and realise I was the one. Not the finest of months, but thankfully I eventually snapped out of it and got rid of him.

    Anyways... Hahaha.

    Haha, I thought it was cute how Sarah (I feel weird saying your name like that, since I'm fairly sure that the character is you...) tripped a little as she walked down the aisle. I'm pretty sure I'm destined to do that for sure... I'm not very graceful. Haha.

    Well, I was glad she finally stood up for herself and told him what she wanted. She was obviously one of the very few lucky ones who had chosen to admit her feelings to someone who actually returned them, so that was nice for her. It was a nice little one shot, with a sweet happy ending, so it was cute.

    I have to say I was slightly disappointed (which may not be the right word, since it's late and I'm in horrible pain, so my brain isn't working exactly right) that it was a happy ending... mostly coz I think it would've been a little more empowering if she told him she wanted to end it and stayed strong to her decision. But for that to work, Brian couldn't have returned her feelings and since you wrote it for your friend, that wouldn't have been fun for her. Hahaha.

    But either way, I enjoyed the story and thank you for recommending it to me Smile
    November 6th, 2012 at 07:45pm